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|type = Jedi
|order= Force Disciple
|image=
|image= [[File:Talis.jpg|250px]]
|firstname=Talis
|firstname= Talis
|lastname=
|homeworld=[[starwars: Alpheridies|Alpheridies]]
|homeworld=[[starwars:Alpheridies|Alpheridies]]
|birth={{Birthyear_and_Age|ABY| 10}}
|birth={{Birthyear_and_Age|ABY|13}}  
|death=
|species=[[starwars:Miraluka|Miraluka]]
|species=[[starwars:Miraluka|Miraluka]]
|gender=[[starwars:Male|Male]]
|gender=[[starwars:Male|Male]]
|hair=Brown
|hair= Light Brown
|eyes=none
|height= 1.9304 meters
|height=1.8 meters
|weight= 86.18kg
|weight=81.64 kg
|mother= Unknown
|mother=unknown
|father= Talin
|father=Talin
|saber= White Lightsaber
|children=none
|form=*[[starwars:Ataru|Ataru]]
|spouse=Single
*[[starwars:Makashi|Makashi]]
|allies=[[Revak Kur]]
|weapons= [[Lightsaber|Lightsaber]]
|enemies=
|fighting style= *[[Mandalorian Core|Mandalorian Core]]
|saber=
|profession= *Reconnaissance
|form= Form 0
*Black Ops
|weapons= Armory Saber
*Anti Terrorism
|fightingstyle= Anything Necessary
*Spycraft
|profession=mechanic
*Combat
|position=none
|affiliation= *[[Odan-Urr|Clan Odan-Urr]]
|era=
*[[House Satele Shan|House Satele Shan]]
|affiliation=[[Odan-Urr]]
*[[Garza's Pathfinders|Garza's Pathfinders]]
|ship=
*[[House Sunrider|House Sunrider]]
|masters=Revak Kur
*[[Tython Squadron|Tython Squadron]]
|apprentices=
|ship= [[starwars: Fang-class|Fang-class]]
|dossier= [[dossier:14096]]
|masters= [[Revak Kur]]
|apprentice= [[Draxion Durk]]
|dossier= [[dossier:14096|14096]]
}}
}}
{{Quote|See, I told you that it wouldn't be that hard.|Talis}}


'''Talis''' is a Miralukan male who was born into slavery. Being sold from master to master Talis moved around so much he forgot which planet he was actually born on. Talis’ only memory of his family was of his father whom he watched die at the hands of a slave master. His name is forever remembered in ink going up the inside of his left forearm. He made his way into house Odan-Urr by complete luck. The product of an unknown man’s sympathy and mercy. Upon arrival he found himself among good people unlike his former life and like he had always done before to survive, he adapted to his new surroundings. Shortly after his arrival he was placed under the tutelage of Revak Kur, the Commander of his new unit, Strike-Team Ooroo. He soon found that he had access to vast library of knowledge that he could utilize to track down where he was from and who he was. So he did just that.


== Character History ==
=== Early Life ===
'''Talis''' was born into slavery and had moved so many planets before he was the age of five that he never knew his place of birth. Talis grew up with his father til around the age of seven when their luck had finally run thin. Talin was caught sneaking scraps of extra food to Talis and was punished severely. He was convicted by their slave master of theft and assault for striking the slave masters son who had begun to beat Talis when he had found out. Talin was sentenced to death by lashing. The slave masters oldest son held Talis a few meters away and forced him to watch as the Slave master beat Talin to death. Upon his fathers death the oldest son leaned in and whispered into his ears. Talis has lived with the horrifying image of his father dying and the words of the slave masters son ringing in his thoughts but has never told anyone the sons words. He has vowed to return to Krayiss II and find both his old slave master and the man's sadistic offspring and make them regret the day they met the young Miralukan.


=== Slave Master Draila ===
'''Talis''' is a Miralukan male who was born on [[starwars: Alpheridies|Alpheridies]] to a Spacecraft mechanic, named Talin. Renowned for his mechanical expertise, Talin worked on all manner of spacecraft. He made his way into [[House Odan-Urr|House Odan-Urr]] by chance. During a planetary summit some Jedi from [[House Odan-Urr|House Odan-Urr]] required some work on their hyperdrive. While playing with some other kids an engine that was being worked on broke loose from its mounts and pinned one of the other children. Not thinking, Talis put his shoulder into the engine and heaved. Even though it was considerably larger than him he was able to shift its weight enough to allow the child to be pulled away from it and taken to hospital. A lone Jedi witnessed the feat of strength and sensed something with the young man. The visiting Jedi approached the father to test the young Miralukan, their kind being known for their Force aptitude, the Jedi was sure that the child was Force sensitive. Talin understanding enough about the force and its ways sent Talis with the two Jedi.  Upon arrival he found himself among a group of strange folks. After some time he opened up to them and found that they were good people who reminded him of home. Shortly after his arrival he was officially placed under the tutelage of [[Revak Kur]], the Commander of his new unit, [[Ooroo|Strike-Team Ooroo]].
At the age of eleven Talis was sold to a new slave master off world. By this time he had begun to plan the murder of his former master. Unfortunately for him his new master lived on a space ship and rarely made orbit. Talis decided to buy his time for his return. He was assigned to meaningless tasks for the first two years of his servitude to his new master. The family grew fond of the young Miralukan and began giving him tasks that required more responsibility. Talis often found himself on the receiving end of jokes from the eldest of the children for his vestigial eye sockets and the dirty cloth that wrapped around them. This trend continued until Talis at the age of fourteen, was given as a present to the Slave Masters second oldest daughter, Ria. Talis went everywhere with the young girl. She clothed him and made sure that where ever she went, he went with her. The two grew close over the next two years.  


During a local festival on New Tython that the family frequented, Talis found himself carrying Draila's bags that obscured his field of vision. But being Miralukan he was able to easily navigate the busy street and stay with her. While walking through some more of the kiosks and watching his master inspect the wares he noticed a man approaching her and give her a once over and making some perverse gestures behind her back. Talis would not suffer the man's insulting behavior. As he passed he shoved through the man with his shoulder, knocking him to the ground along with some of his masters newly purchased items. The man was the captain of the local security forces and when he rose he pulled a stun baton and struck Talis in the back. Talis keeled over from the sudden attack and intense pain in his lower back. He did his best to avoid damaging Draila's property as the man began yelling and scolding Talis for not watching where he was going. As the man raised his arm to strike him again Draila intervened and was struck. Talis' rage ignited, placed the belongings on the ground and slowly stood and faced the man. With a handful a quick strikes he planted the man on his back and placed Draila behind him. He turned to her and nodded to an alleyway across the street from the altercation and against her objections Talis corralled her down the alleyway and urged her return to her family.


Finally Draila saw reason and fled the scene and Talis turned to meet the four other officers who had come to their captains defense. He smiled and stood tall before them before he attacked. He found himself in a loosing battle quick. He had originally had the upper hand and was winning against the insurmountable odds but their sheer force of numbers overwhelmed him. Talis found himself beaten and in shackles before a large group of onlookers. Among them was a man whose aura stuck out to Talis. Unknown to him, the man would change his life forever.
== Physical Description ==
Talis stands around six foot tall and has an athletic build. He wears [[starwars:Dathomiri|Dathomiri]] combat robes of a dark grey color or his old phase 2 [[starwars:Clone Armor|Clone Armor]]. His vestigial eye sockets are covered by a black strip cloth tied behind his head. His light brown hair is cut short in a military high and tight. He keeps his facial hair to a short stubbly beard. He has no tattoos and no plans on getting any. He stands with his chest out but his shoulders slumped as if his arms had heavy weights dragging them to the floor. He carries his lightsaber on the back of his belt with the emitter pointed to his right.


=== Incarceration and its path to the Jedi ===
== Character History ==
Talis spent about a month in jail for fighting with the New Tyhon security forces. He was a little worse for ware but his injuries had all healed pretty well given the circumstances. It was at the one month mark that his master and her family arrived. The oldest made jokes, and the younger ones made annoying noises as they waited for the guard to make it down to his cell. Talis knew this was it for his time with Draila. He would probably be sold to some junk scrapper at a bargain price or to some slave fighter for a huge discounted price. Thats when he saw him again. The man from before standing behind the family. Draila's father shook the mans hand as he took something from him. The man smiled and nodded in Talis' direction. That was it. His life was that useless that he could be discarded or sold with an exchange of coin and a handshake. It was Talis' own fault for catching feeling for Draila. Now he had to suffer them being separated because of his jealousy. Talis was let out shortly where he was formally informed by Draila's father that he had been sold to a man named Revak Kur. Talis was infuriated but he did not voice his opinion to his former owner. It meant nothing to the man. Talis waited with Draila's father at the designated meeting point. Dock C3 Seher Spaceport.
=== Early Life ===
'''Talis'''  spent almost all of his early years with his father as indentured servants to a spacecraft repair guild. Horse playing and roughhousing with the other mechanics kids in a repair shop for spacecraft. The bigger the shuttle the more fun the kids had. Talis' life was really good up until he had a chance run in with some Jedi from the Odan Urr. While playing with some other kids an engine that was being worked on broke loose from its mounts and pinned one of the other children. Not thinking, Talis put his shoulder into the engine and heaved. Even though it was considerably larger than him he was able to shift its weight enough to allow the child to be pulled away from it and taken to hospital. A lone Jedi witnessed the feat of strength and sensed something with the young man. The visiting Jedi approached the father to test the young Miralukan, their kind being known for their Force aptitude, the Jedi was sure that Talis was Force sensitive. Talis was well known for being abnormally strong his entire life but what he had done was beyond physical ability of a young teenager. After the test the Jedi found that the boy was indeed force sensitive and asked the father to allow him to train in the ways of the force within the Disciples Of Odan Urr on New Tython. Due to him being an indentured servant Talin had no say but did give his blessing for the Jedi to barter for his young son. The negotiations ended badly and the guild was destroyed shortly after by a rival guild due to the damage that the Jedi had caused to the rank structure of the guild. He started his path towards becoming a Jedi at a little above the normal age and spent the later half of his early life under the tutelage of a Zabrak named [[Revak Kur]]


After about an hour a YT-2000 light freighter landed at the dock platform and a tall man with a hood exited the space craft and made his way towards the duo. As he neared Talis could slowly make out features of the mans face and his aura. He was a Zabrak and for some reason that made him feel better and he had no clue why. Talis felt a solid push hit him in the square of his shoulder blades as Draila's father motioned for him to meet his new master. Talis walked out with his eyes head bowed to avoid coming off as arrogant. He soon found out that Revak Kur had used Odan Urr funds to procure him and free him from slavery and teach him in the ways of the force. At the time he thought it to be a huge misapplication of funds until he found out how much they paid for him and then he was appalled and insulted at such a low price for such a useful slave. Soon after being purchased Talis arrived at clan Odan Urr and was given his freedom and began his training in the ways of the force.  
===Talis' First Great Jedi War===
Talis spent most of the Eleventh Great Jedi War attached to Battle Team Ooroo but got lost and separated from his team. He linked up with a high valued target, Rhiaen, whose sister was missing. They ended up engaging against Conner who fled like a coward just before Darth [[Necren]] appeared. Talis spent the first half of the fight taking on Darth Necren alone where she treated him like a child who had just constructed his first lightsaber. It wasn’t until Rhiaen pulled herself together that they started to gain ground against the Sith assassin. It didn’t last long because a few minutes into the duos onslaught Talis was overtaken by his fatigue from using his rage to fuel his fighting. The fight looked like Darth Necren was going to end it as she tortured Rhiaen with lightning but Talis mustered all he had left and pushed the deranged sith assassin away from Rhiaen. She responded with trying to kill Talis only to be interrupted at the last possible second by his Master and the rest of their team. Talis, utterly spent and unable to move for several days and Rhiaen who would be lucky to keep one of her eyes, were out of the fight. It soon ended shortly after that and Talis left [[New Tython|New Tython]] to find a way to cope with what he had been through during the Great Jedi War.
 
===Eleventh Great Jedi War Until the Sacking of New Tython===
Talis spent a large quantity of time in the bars around various worlds that he bounced between. Making money on the side when he could. Helping out with odd jobs here and there. He rarely stayed in one place for more than a couple days. Mainly to avoid detection and to always keep moving just to make sure that if did ever go do a job he could claim plausible deniability or just vanish and nobody would be the wiser that some drifter disappeared. He spent most of his time, when he wasn't drifting around the galaxy in a booze induced trance, studying the intricacies of female anatomy. Talis had a chance encounter with a Jedi by the name of [[Daniel Stephens|Seraphol]] . Talis decided to return to New Tython to take up his responsibilities once again as a Jedi.


===Talis' First Great Jedi War===
===The knighting===
Talis spent most of it attached to Battle Team Ooroo but lost and separated from his team. He linked up with a high valued target, Rhiaen, whose sister was missing. They ended up engaging against Conner who fled like a coward just before Darth Necren appeared. Talis spent the first half of the fight taking on Darth Necren alone where she treated him like a child who had just custructed his first lightsaber. It wasnt until Rhiaen pulled herself together that they started to gain ground against the Sith assassin. It didnt last long because a few minutes into the duos onslaught Talis was overtaken by his fatigue from using his rage as much as he was. The fight looked like Darth Necren was going to end it as she tortured Rhiaen with lightning but Talis mustered all he had left and pushed the deranged sith assassin away from Rhiaen. She responded with trying to kill Talis only to be interupted at the last possible second by his team. Talis, utterly spent and unable to move for several days and Rhiaen who would be lucky to keep one of her eyes were out of the fight. It soon ended shortly after that and Talis left New Tython to find a way to cope with what he had been through during the Great Jedi War.
Upon returning to New Tython Talis began his training where he had left off. He spent most of his days working with his Master, [[Revak Kur|Revak Kur]], who had switched units, and spending his time completing his final trials. During a sparring session Darth Pravus' fleet attacked New Tython. During his escape Talis found himself carrying [[Elleron Morakei|Nathan Decarius]] to the evacuation shuttle while New Tython was destroyed around him. His heroism and calm mind proved to the Jedi council what they needed to know about him. The next day they Knighted him in the mess hall of the [[Proxia Mustirion|Proxia Mustirion]]. Talis has had a deep rooted hatred of Darth Pravus since the destruction of New Tython. Many believe it was due to the death of a close friend in the Odanite Defense Force.  


===Eleventh Great Jedi War until the Sacking of New Tython===
===Garza's Pathfinders===
Talis spent a large quantity of time in the bars around various worlds that he bounced between. Making money on the side when he could. Helping out with odd jobs here and there. He rarely stayed in one place for more than a couple days. Mainly to avoid detection and to always keep moving just to make sure that if did ever go do a job he could claim plausible deniability or just vanish and nobody would be the wiser that some drifter disappeared. He spent most of his time, when he wasn't drifting around the galaxy in a booze induced trance, studying the intricacies of female anatomy. He stumbled across his first slave owner and his son recently and brought their slave trading business to an abrupt hault. He also found out what planet he was from in some documents and the location of Draila. She had spent some time looking for him apparently before she turned to pirating. He spent six months hunting her down only to find out that she went into wild space and hasnt been heard from since. Talis decided to return to New Tython to take up his responsibilities once again as a Jedi.  
Talis' battle record and experience netted him a position upon the newly formed Garza's Pathfinders as a Pathfinder. His stealth operation capabilities would be put to the test in the coming months as he endeavored to perform his duties to the utmost of his ability and his superiors expectations.


===The Worst Homecoming===
While with the Pathfinders, Talis took part in both the [[Battle of Florrum]] and the Polyphemous Operation. He was injured in the line of duty during the Polyphemous operation and spent a few weeks healing from his injuries.
Upon returning to New Tython Talis found himself in the middle of a battle for survival as soon as the ship he was on exited hyperspace. The new Grand Marshal was Sacking New Tython and killing as many people on the planet as he could. Talis managed to escape thanks to some luck and mild ignorance of where you should and should not jump to hyperspace. Like in the hangar of the destroyed Fey’lya’s Last Stand just as a way to keep covered from any tractor beams or bombardment. He also learned that its a good way to turn two sith into Sithcakes. Talis rendezvoused with the surviving force aboard the VSD Endors Triumph where he is currently residing.  


===Tython Squadron===
After a few tense weeks, Talis was reassigned to [[Tython Squadron|Tython Squadron]]. A new starfighter squadron that specialized in interception and seek and destroy missions flying a flight of captured Tie Defenders. He exemplified himself on multiple occasions to earn himself the title of Tython Ace under the call sign Warpath. Due to his exemplary service and leadership ability, Talis was promoted to Aedile when [[Landon Cruise|Maximus]] stepped down as Satele Shan's Quaster and [[Mauro wynter|Mauro wynter]] vacated the Aedile position to ascend to the leadership role of Quaster. Due to personal reason Talis stepped down as Aedile of Satele Shan and continued his training.


== Physical Description ==
==Notable Equipment==


== Trivia ==
===Mandalorian Armor===
* Interesting fact 1
Talis has taken his vows as a member of the Corsair mandalorian clan.
* Interesting fact 2
* Etc


[[Category:Disciples of Odan-Urr]]
[[Category:Odan-Urr members]]

Latest revision as of 16:16, 29 July 2024

Exodus era.New Order era.
Talis
Biographical Information
Homeworld:

Alpheridies

Date of Birth:

10 ABY (age 32)

Physical Description
Species:

Miraluka

Gender:

Male

Height:

1.9304 meters

Weight:

86.18kg

Hair:

Light Brown

Personal Information
Mother:

Unknown

Father:

Talin

Lightsaber Color(s):

White Lightsaber

Lightsaber Form(s):
Weapon(s):

Lightsaber

Chronology & Political Information
Profession:
  • Reconnaissance
  • Black Ops
  • Anti Terrorism
  • Spycraft
  • Combat
Affiliation:
Personal Ship:

Fang-class

Known masters:

Revak Kur

Dossier:

14096

[ Source ]



Talis is a Miralukan male who was born on Alpheridies to a Spacecraft mechanic, named Talin. Renowned for his mechanical expertise, Talin worked on all manner of spacecraft. He made his way into House Odan-Urr by chance. During a planetary summit some Jedi from House Odan-Urr required some work on their hyperdrive. While playing with some other kids an engine that was being worked on broke loose from its mounts and pinned one of the other children. Not thinking, Talis put his shoulder into the engine and heaved. Even though it was considerably larger than him he was able to shift its weight enough to allow the child to be pulled away from it and taken to hospital. A lone Jedi witnessed the feat of strength and sensed something with the young man. The visiting Jedi approached the father to test the young Miralukan, their kind being known for their Force aptitude, the Jedi was sure that the child was Force sensitive. Talin understanding enough about the force and its ways sent Talis with the two Jedi. Upon arrival he found himself among a group of strange folks. After some time he opened up to them and found that they were good people who reminded him of home. Shortly after his arrival he was officially placed under the tutelage of Revak Kur, the Commander of his new unit, Strike-Team Ooroo.


Physical Description

Talis stands around six foot tall and has an athletic build. He wears Dathomiri combat robes of a dark grey color or his old phase 2 Clone Armor. His vestigial eye sockets are covered by a black strip cloth tied behind his head. His light brown hair is cut short in a military high and tight. He keeps his facial hair to a short stubbly beard. He has no tattoos and no plans on getting any. He stands with his chest out but his shoulders slumped as if his arms had heavy weights dragging them to the floor. He carries his lightsaber on the back of his belt with the emitter pointed to his right.

Character History

Early Life

Talis spent almost all of his early years with his father as indentured servants to a spacecraft repair guild. Horse playing and roughhousing with the other mechanics kids in a repair shop for spacecraft. The bigger the shuttle the more fun the kids had. Talis' life was really good up until he had a chance run in with some Jedi from the Odan Urr. While playing with some other kids an engine that was being worked on broke loose from its mounts and pinned one of the other children. Not thinking, Talis put his shoulder into the engine and heaved. Even though it was considerably larger than him he was able to shift its weight enough to allow the child to be pulled away from it and taken to hospital. A lone Jedi witnessed the feat of strength and sensed something with the young man. The visiting Jedi approached the father to test the young Miralukan, their kind being known for their Force aptitude, the Jedi was sure that Talis was Force sensitive. Talis was well known for being abnormally strong his entire life but what he had done was beyond physical ability of a young teenager. After the test the Jedi found that the boy was indeed force sensitive and asked the father to allow him to train in the ways of the force within the Disciples Of Odan Urr on New Tython. Due to him being an indentured servant Talin had no say but did give his blessing for the Jedi to barter for his young son. The negotiations ended badly and the guild was destroyed shortly after by a rival guild due to the damage that the Jedi had caused to the rank structure of the guild. He started his path towards becoming a Jedi at a little above the normal age and spent the later half of his early life under the tutelage of a Zabrak named Revak Kur

Talis' First Great Jedi War

Talis spent most of the Eleventh Great Jedi War attached to Battle Team Ooroo but got lost and separated from his team. He linked up with a high valued target, Rhiaen, whose sister was missing. They ended up engaging against Conner who fled like a coward just before Darth Necren appeared. Talis spent the first half of the fight taking on Darth Necren alone where she treated him like a child who had just constructed his first lightsaber. It wasn’t until Rhiaen pulled herself together that they started to gain ground against the Sith assassin. It didn’t last long because a few minutes into the duos onslaught Talis was overtaken by his fatigue from using his rage to fuel his fighting. The fight looked like Darth Necren was going to end it as she tortured Rhiaen with lightning but Talis mustered all he had left and pushed the deranged sith assassin away from Rhiaen. She responded with trying to kill Talis only to be interrupted at the last possible second by his Master and the rest of their team. Talis, utterly spent and unable to move for several days and Rhiaen who would be lucky to keep one of her eyes, were out of the fight. It soon ended shortly after that and Talis left New Tython to find a way to cope with what he had been through during the Great Jedi War.

Eleventh Great Jedi War Until the Sacking of New Tython

Talis spent a large quantity of time in the bars around various worlds that he bounced between. Making money on the side when he could. Helping out with odd jobs here and there. He rarely stayed in one place for more than a couple days. Mainly to avoid detection and to always keep moving just to make sure that if did ever go do a job he could claim plausible deniability or just vanish and nobody would be the wiser that some drifter disappeared. He spent most of his time, when he wasn't drifting around the galaxy in a booze induced trance, studying the intricacies of female anatomy. Talis had a chance encounter with a Jedi by the name of Seraphol . Talis decided to return to New Tython to take up his responsibilities once again as a Jedi.

The knighting

Upon returning to New Tython Talis began his training where he had left off. He spent most of his days working with his Master, Revak Kur, who had switched units, and spending his time completing his final trials. During a sparring session Darth Pravus' fleet attacked New Tython. During his escape Talis found himself carrying Nathan Decarius to the evacuation shuttle while New Tython was destroyed around him. His heroism and calm mind proved to the Jedi council what they needed to know about him. The next day they Knighted him in the mess hall of the Proxia Mustirion. Talis has had a deep rooted hatred of Darth Pravus since the destruction of New Tython. Many believe it was due to the death of a close friend in the Odanite Defense Force.

Garza's Pathfinders

Talis' battle record and experience netted him a position upon the newly formed Garza's Pathfinders as a Pathfinder. His stealth operation capabilities would be put to the test in the coming months as he endeavored to perform his duties to the utmost of his ability and his superiors expectations.

While with the Pathfinders, Talis took part in both the Battle of Florrum and the Polyphemous Operation. He was injured in the line of duty during the Polyphemous operation and spent a few weeks healing from his injuries.

Tython Squadron

After a few tense weeks, Talis was reassigned to Tython Squadron. A new starfighter squadron that specialized in interception and seek and destroy missions flying a flight of captured Tie Defenders. He exemplified himself on multiple occasions to earn himself the title of Tython Ace under the call sign Warpath. Due to his exemplary service and leadership ability, Talis was promoted to Aedile when Maximus stepped down as Satele Shan's Quaster and Mauro wynter vacated the Aedile position to ascend to the leadership role of Quaster. Due to personal reason Talis stepped down as Aedile of Satele Shan and continued his training.

Notable Equipment

Mandalorian Armor

Talis has taken his vows as a member of the Corsair mandalorian clan.