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| *'''Object''' - Decent article but there is no opening/introduction paragraph. The gramm'''a'''r could use some work as well as the article's general layout/formatting. With a little bit of extra work polishing it up and expanding some areas this could be "featured" worthy. - [[User:Vladimir|Vladimir]] 16:31, 31 December 2007 (MST) | | *'''Object''' - Decent article but there is no opening/introduction paragraph. The gramm'''a'''r could use some work as well as the article's general layout/formatting. With a little bit of extra work polishing it up and expanding some areas this could be "featured" worthy. - [[User:Vladimir|Vladimir]] 16:31, 31 December 2007 (MST) |
| | *'''Object''' - The article could use more detail and expansion. Missing a real summary/introduction. A lot more fleshing out is needed for your character for this page to be Featured, although you're moving in the right direction --[[User:Halcyon|Halcyon]] 18:32, 1 January 2008 (MST) |
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| * '''Support''' It's detailed, informative, and has a lot of content. Although the "brief history" and "economy" sections look a tad bit too short compared to the others, the size of these two sections doesn't harm its overall feel. Nice work, Clan Taldryan. -- [[User:RevengeX|RevengeX Palpatine]] 19:28, 25 December 2007 (MST) | | * '''Support''' It's detailed, informative, and has a lot of content. Although the "brief history" and "economy" sections look a tad bit too short compared to the others, the size of these two sections doesn't harm its overall feel. Nice work, Clan Taldryan. -- [[User:RevengeX|RevengeX Palpatine]] 19:28, 25 December 2007 (MST) |
| * '''Support''' Very nice article. --[[User:Dismal|Dismal]] 00:55, 1 January 2008 (MST) | | * '''Support''' Very nice article. --[[User:Dismal|Dismal]] 00:55, 1 January 2008 (MST) |
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| *'''Weak Support''' Images? Descriptions of crew? The history section is great, though. -- [[User:RevengeX|RevengeX Palpatine]] 14:23, 30 December 2007 (MST) | | *'''Weak Support''' Images? Descriptions of crew? The history section is great, though. -- [[User:RevengeX|RevengeX Palpatine]] 14:23, 30 December 2007 (MST) |
| *'''Support''' - Finally a good ship/OOB article! As Revvy said a few extra images could really make this article shine but even without them the history is complete and interesting. Well done! - [[User:Vladimir|Vladimir]] 16:35, 31 December 2007 (MST) | | *'''Support''' - Finally a good ship/OOB article! As Revvy said a few extra images could really make this article shine but even without them the history is complete and interesting. Well done! - [[User:Vladimir|Vladimir]] 16:35, 31 December 2007 (MST) |
| | *'''Weak Support''' - Well written, and the first Clan-based ship that seems to have a real history behind it. Specific images related to the ship would help things greatly as it "looks" a bit bland--[[User:Halcyon|Halcyon]] 18:32, 1 January 2008 (MST) |
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| *'''Object''' While your article is not bad, it needs more links, and you need to fix the strange paragraph formatting under the "Character History" section. There are also several spelling mistakes scattered throughout the entire article. You "making a deal" with Luke Skywalker seems a bit unlikely. Why isn't "Anubis Wrath" mentioned in any of the books? -- [[User:RevengeX|RevengeX Palpatine]] 09:46, 31 December 2007 (MST) | | *'''Object''' While your article is not bad, it needs more links, and you need to fix the strange paragraph formatting under the "Character History" section. There are also several spelling mistakes scattered throughout the entire article. You "making a deal" with Luke Skywalker seems a bit unlikely. Why isn't "Anubis Wrath" mentioned in any of the books? -- [[User:RevengeX|RevengeX Palpatine]] 09:46, 31 December 2007 (MST) |
| *'''Object''' - The character history is pretty good but your character being accepted to the Jedi Academy on Yavin IV and interacting that much with Luke Skywalker? Not feasible under what I've seen from other articles. Spelling and grammar errors also plague this article. Needs more polish and a slight history adjustment to bring it up to par. - [[User:Vladimir|Vladimir]] 16:39, 31 December 2007 (MST) | | *'''Object''' - The character history is pretty good but your character being accepted to the Jedi Academy on Yavin IV and interacting that much with Luke Skywalker? Not feasible under what I've seen from other articles. Spelling and grammar errors also plague this article. Needs more polish and a slight history adjustment to bring it up to par. - [[User:Vladimir|Vladimir]] 16:39, 31 December 2007 (MST) |
| | *'''Object''' - As mentioned already, you really need to look at your "history" in the Jedi Academy. From the time lines you give, you would have been the only child training at the time. Coupled with being at the Academy for so long, you would be "known" to many of the canon characters. You are much too involved in the canon storyline of Star Wars. "Owning" a holocron by Ajunta Pall seems a bit far-reaching as well. Also, go through and find those grammar/spelling mistakes --[[User:Halcyon|Halcyon]] 18:32, 1 January 2008 (MST) |
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The featured articles of the wiki are articles that represent the best DJBWiki has to offer. This is not a way to showcase the articles of your favorite characters, spaceships, or the like.
So just what makes a featured article? Well, we've prepared a list just in case someone should ask that, and it is as follows.
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List an article and leave your signature for the nomination(s) - additional comments beyond support or object (unless you have concrete reasons as to why you object) are not required and will be deleted.
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Nominated by --Olar 12:07, 24 Dec '07 (EST)
- Weak Support - Good article, there are a couple of grammer issues I noticed and the summary was pretty thin, not that detailed. It's very character driven and I like that. -User:Ashura Isradia 12:20, 24 December 2007 (GMT)
- Object Overall, it's not "terrible," but it has room for improvement. Along with a few grammar errors, the article is, quite simply, not "beefy" enough. My recommendations: Beef up the summary/introduction, beef up the character history (more details, etc.), beef up the "gear & equipment" section, beef up the "assassin within" section, beef up the "characteristics" section, and make sure that there are not any simple spelling/grammar mistakes. -- RevengeX Palpatine 19:28, 25 December 2007 (MST)
- Weak Support - Good article Davin, but I recommend having a friend highlight grammer errors for you, so that you may correct them. --Anubis 01:49, 31 December 2007 (MST)
- Object - Decent article but there is no opening/introduction paragraph. The grammar could use some work as well as the article's general layout/formatting. With a little bit of extra work polishing it up and expanding some areas this could be "featured" worthy. - Vladimir 16:31, 31 December 2007 (MST)
- Object - The article could use more detail and expansion. Missing a real summary/introduction. A lot more fleshing out is needed for your character for this page to be Featured, although you're moving in the right direction --Halcyon 18:32, 1 January 2008 (MST)
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Nominated by--Halcyon 09:33, 24 December 2007 (MST)
- Support It's detailed, informative, and has a lot of content. Although the "brief history" and "economy" sections look a tad bit too short compared to the others, the size of these two sections doesn't harm its overall feel. Nice work, Clan Taldryan. -- RevengeX Palpatine 19:28, 25 December 2007 (MST)
- Support Very nice article. --Dismal 00:55, 1 January 2008 (MST)
Nominated by--Timbal 07:51, 28 December 2007 (MST)
- Weak Support Images? Descriptions of crew? The history section is great, though. -- RevengeX Palpatine 14:23, 30 December 2007 (MST)
- Support - Finally a good ship/OOB article! As Revvy said a few extra images could really make this article shine but even without them the history is complete and interesting. Well done! - Vladimir 16:35, 31 December 2007 (MST)
- Weak Support - Well written, and the first Clan-based ship that seems to have a real history behind it. Specific images related to the ship would help things greatly as it "looks" a bit bland--Halcyon 18:32, 1 January 2008 (MST)
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Nominated by --Anubis 23:37, 30 December 2007 (MST)
- Object While your article is not bad, it needs more links, and you need to fix the strange paragraph formatting under the "Character History" section. There are also several spelling mistakes scattered throughout the entire article. You "making a deal" with Luke Skywalker seems a bit unlikely. Why isn't "Anubis Wrath" mentioned in any of the books? -- RevengeX Palpatine 09:46, 31 December 2007 (MST)
- Object - The character history is pretty good but your character being accepted to the Jedi Academy on Yavin IV and interacting that much with Luke Skywalker? Not feasible under what I've seen from other articles. Spelling and grammar errors also plague this article. Needs more polish and a slight history adjustment to bring it up to par. - Vladimir 16:39, 31 December 2007 (MST)
- Object - As mentioned already, you really need to look at your "history" in the Jedi Academy. From the time lines you give, you would have been the only child training at the time. Coupled with being at the Academy for so long, you would be "known" to many of the canon characters. You are much too involved in the canon storyline of Star Wars. "Owning" a holocron by Ajunta Pall seems a bit far-reaching as well. Also, go through and find those grammar/spelling mistakes --Halcyon 18:32, 1 January 2008 (MST)