Quality
This article reads too much like a story. Try to be more objective and remove the dialogue - that should make it better. -- RevengeX Palpatine 10:07, 5 August 2008 (MDT)
- This article has improved a lot since the quality tag was added and, after re-jigging headings, I removed it. --Windos 22:56, 16 October 2009 (UTC)
Links
I added the underlinked template. I'll linkifiy this article next time I decide to go though Category:Underlinked Articles unless someone else beats me to it. --Windos 22:56, 16 October 2009 (UTC)