Quality Mk.II
As previous mentioned on your talk page, your article reads like a story. It is important that you remember that this isn't a piece of writing that is aiming to impress someone, it is a page detailing life events of your character in terms of facts. If you wish to expand on the facts, that is welcomed, but when the character article reads like a story, it isn't serving its purpose. Please refer to some of the past or current featured character articles. As pointed out below, you can start with taking out unnecessary information, especially dialogue.
I have also added this tag because of numerous grammatical and spelling errors on the page. Make sure you check the capitalization of certain words for examples.
Finally, I added an underlinked tag because after your first few paragraphs, the article just turns into a block of white text with no references or links to other pages, despite many opportunities to do so.
If you have any questions, feel free to ask on my talk page
Meleu Karthdo (talk) 10:47, 6 November 2014 (EST)
Quality
Hey there, Zeon. I looked over your article, and I noticed that there is a lot of room for improvement for your character article. Remember, this is a character article, not a story, so it is important to write it like one. The first thing you can do is summarize events. Summarizing is a skill that takes a lot of time to develop, but you can begin by weeding out unnecessary facts and details that don't really contribute to the overall picture. You can also eliminate dialogue. If you have any questions, please feel free to write on my user talk page or email me. --RevengeX Palpatine 02:19, 26 September 2009 (UTC)
Finished for now
taken off the Constitution banner for the hope i have completed the wiki for now.
JK Z Blacktooth