Just curious, but is it really necessary to have all the one lined headings? Couldn't they be combined? ~ Legorii 16:26, 17 September 2008 (MDT)
- I agree with Legorii here. Please combine those sections. I suggest grouping them by a main event or idea, instead of by year. I will do it if you don't. If you don't understand what I mean, please contact me. Thanks. -- RevengeX Palpatine 19:55, 17 September 2008 (MDT)
- Headings gone. Thanks for the suggestion. -- Koryn Thraagus (21:35 GMT; 18 September 2008.)
Could you expand a bit on how your brother served in the Imperial Navy? Kuat was only under Imperial control until 8 ABY when the New Republic liberated it, and you put yourself as being born in 7 ABY. Just try to be plausible in your character history. --Alaris 13:42, 8 December 2008 (MST)
To be honest, I had forgotten to check what year Kuat was released from Imperial control, so thanks for the reminder. I have now changed the information though from 'Imperial Navy' to 'New Republic Defense Fleet'. -- Koryn Thraagus 15:02, 9 December 2008 (MST)
Removing confiscation tag due to changes in article. Change made on 23rd July, 2011, approx. 02:40 GMT. Koryn Thraagus (24th July 2011, 00:38 GMT)
It seems to be a bit much that a low or mid-level Equite (Robin) and what I presume to be a Jedi Hunter (Koryn) basically infiltrated the homeworld of the Chiss; broke into an important facility (the Library); killed everyone there and then escaped unscathed. Overall that is too far-fetched. The Chiss, being paranoid in general, would probably have some pretty strict protocols around ships landing on their home planet, let alone doing anything else while there.
Removed tag along with entire section. Koryn Thraagus (21st April 2012, 09:30 GMT)