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* As Rev has already said, try to avoid writing in first person view when writing a character article. If you need/want any help, contact me and I'll help you out. --[[User:Anubis Wrath|Anubis]] 19:43, 9 November 2008 (MST)
* As Rev has already said, try to avoid writing in first person view when writing a character article. If you need/want any help, contact me and I'll help you out. --[[User:Anubis Wrath|Anubis]] 19:43, 9 November 2008 (MST)
I hope no one minds, but I fixed some misspelled words and the 1st person problem.  If it is a problem, I can revert it back.  --[[Jaredi Edius]]


== Article name ==
== Article name ==


According to [http://www.darkjedibrotherhood.com/dbjedi/dossier.asp?ID=10209 your dossier], your name is "Jon Khioo".  Identity crisis? --[[User:RevengeX|RevengeX Palpatine]] 09:14, 9 November 2008 (MST)
According to [[dossier:10209|your dossier]], your name is "Jon Khioo".  Identity crisis? --[[User:RevengeX|RevengeX Palpatine]] 09:14, 9 November 2008 (MST)


Krizznakk, I recommend writing in the third person, as in write it like someone else telling the story, not the main character. This makes it seem less like a story and more like a factual autobiography.
Krizznakk, I recommend writing in the third person, as in write it like someone else telling the story, not the main character. This makes it seem less like a story and more like a factual autobiography.
== Dossier Existence? ==
Not to be a nudge or anything, but dossier 10209 does not exist.  So is this a NPC or actual DB member? [[Phoenix d'Tana Palpatine]]

Latest revision as of 19:45, 23 October 2009

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Please try to avoid writing in the first person. Thanks. --RevengeX Palpatine 06:45, 9 November 2008 (MST)

  • As Rev has already said, try to avoid writing in first person view when writing a character article. If you need/want any help, contact me and I'll help you out. --Anubis 19:43, 9 November 2008 (MST)

I hope no one minds, but I fixed some misspelled words and the 1st person problem. If it is a problem, I can revert it back. --Jaredi Edius

Article name

According to your dossier, your name is "Jon Khioo". Identity crisis? --RevengeX Palpatine 09:14, 9 November 2008 (MST)

Krizznakk, I recommend writing in the third person, as in write it like someone else telling the story, not the main character. This makes it seem less like a story and more like a factual autobiography.

Dossier Existence?

Not to be a nudge or anything, but dossier 10209 does not exist. So is this a NPC or actual DB member? Phoenix d'Tana Palpatine