Headings
Just curious, but is it really necessary to have all the one lined headings? Couldn't they be combined? ~ Legorii 16:26, 17 September 2008 (MDT)
- I agree with Legorii here. Please combine those sections. I suggest grouping them by a main event or idea, instead of by year. I will do it if you don't. If you don't understand what I mean, please contact me. Thanks. -- RevengeX Palpatine 19:55, 17 September 2008 (MDT)
- Headings gone. Thanks for the suggestion. -- Koryn Thraagus (21:35 GMT; 18 September 2008.)
Continuity
Could you expand a bit on how your brother served in the Imperial Navy? Kuat was only under Imperial control until 8 ABY when the New Republic liberated it, and you put yourself as being born in 7 ABY. Just try to be plausible in your character history. --Alaris 13:42, 8 December 2008 (MST)
To be honest, I had forgotten to check what year Kuat was released from Imperial control, so thanks for the reminder. I have now changed the information though from 'Imperial Navy' to 'New Republic Defense Fleet'. -- Koryn Thraagus 15:02, 9 December 2008 (MST)