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| Another thing is your dossier has you named Krandon, but on the page you list a different name and give yourself a last name... it's a bit confusing. If you're trying to show that you gave yourself a "Dark Jedi" name, maybe clarify that in your history. When you're writing, try to stick to one tense. If your history is in third-person, keep the rest of your page (Achievements and Trivia) the same. So more "He, Krandon, the Obelisk", etc rather than "I and me". Hope that helps. --[[User:Shadow Taldrya|Shadow Taldrya]] 16:05, 5 March 2008 (MST) | | Another thing is your dossier has you named Krandon, but on the page you list a different name and give yourself a last name... it's a bit confusing. If you're trying to show that you gave yourself a "Dark Jedi" name, maybe clarify that in your history. When you're writing, try to stick to one tense. If your history is in third-person, keep the rest of your page (Achievements and Trivia) the same. So more "He, Krandon, the Obelisk", etc rather than "I and me". Hope that helps. --[[User:Shadow Taldrya|Shadow Taldrya]] 16:05, 5 March 2008 (MST) |
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| | When updating your page, please use the "Show Preview" option, instead of saving the page after every change. It cuts down on the recent changes that the staff has to view, helping us out a lot. Thanks --[[User:Tron|Tron]] 12:31, 13 March 2008 (MDT) |
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| | Try reworking the section full of dialogue into a more wiki article biography type section ^^. --[[User:Solari|Windos]] 00:35, 23 October 2009 (UTC) |
Latest revision as of 22:35, 30 June 2016
Krandon, it would be a good idea for you to check out some of the other wiki pages to give yourself some ideas on what to do. Also, a few DB canon issues - first of which is the fact that the current DB year is 28 ABY. Depending how old you want your character, you should choose some time 15+ years before that. 78 ABY is a long ways away.
Another thing is your dossier has you named Krandon, but on the page you list a different name and give yourself a last name... it's a bit confusing. If you're trying to show that you gave yourself a "Dark Jedi" name, maybe clarify that in your history. When you're writing, try to stick to one tense. If your history is in third-person, keep the rest of your page (Achievements and Trivia) the same. So more "He, Krandon, the Obelisk", etc rather than "I and me". Hope that helps. --Shadow Taldrya 16:05, 5 March 2008 (MST)
When updating your page, please use the "Show Preview" option, instead of saving the page after every change. It cuts down on the recent changes that the staff has to view, helping us out a lot. Thanks --Tron 12:31, 13 March 2008 (MDT)
Quality tag
Try reworking the section full of dialogue into a more wiki article biography type section ^^. --Windos 00:35, 23 October 2009 (UTC)