Talk:Galleros Sjl

From Wikipedia of the Dark Brotherhood, an online Star Wars Club

Quality Control

There are a few issues with your article. Primarily, it reads like a story. A lot of the text is in present text as if you are writing a real-time fiction. You have to remember that your character article is somewhere for facts and information about your character to be displayed. Try and take out unimportant words and phrases in order to get rid of the quality tag.

Secondly, I have put your article in the underlinked articles category. Whilst the first portion of your article is fine, the rest is a bunch of white text with one or two links per section, despite plenty of words begging to be linked.

Thirdly, I have added another tag for the images, you only have a character image and could benefit from other images to complement your article so it doesn't just look like a wall of text.

Finally, another point about quality, you need to make sure all your grammar and spelling is correct. In the majority of your sentences, certain things are capitalized when they shouldn't be and commas are used when not needed. Also try to be consistent with capital letters.

Meleu Karthdo (talk) 19:08, 6 November 2014 (EST)