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| Hey there, Zeon. I looked over your article, and I noticed that there is a lot of room for improvement for your character article. Remember, this is a character ''article'', not a story, so it is important to write it like one. The first thing you can do is summarize events. Summarizing is a skill that takes a lot of time to develop, but you can begin by weeding out unnecessary facts and details that don't really contribute to the overall picture. You can also eliminate dialogue. If you have any questions, please feel free to write on [[User talk:RevengeX|my user talk page]] or email me. --[[User:RevengeX|RevengeX Palpatine]] 02:19, 26 September 2009 (UTC) | | Hey there, Zeon. I looked over your article, and I noticed that there is a lot of room for improvement for your character article. Remember, this is a character ''article'', not a story, so it is important to write it like one. The first thing you can do is summarize events. Summarizing is a skill that takes a lot of time to develop, but you can begin by weeding out unnecessary facts and details that don't really contribute to the overall picture. You can also eliminate dialogue. If you have any questions, please feel free to write on [[User talk:RevengeX|my user talk page]] or email me. --[[User:RevengeX|RevengeX Palpatine]] 02:19, 26 September 2009 (UTC) |
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Hey there, Zeon. I looked over your article, and I noticed that there is a lot of room for improvement for your character article. Remember, this is a character article, not a story, so it is important to write it like one. The first thing you can do is summarize events. Summarizing is a skill that takes a lot of time to develop, but you can begin by weeding out unnecessary facts and details that don't really contribute to the overall picture. You can also eliminate dialogue. If you have any questions, please feel free to write on my user talk page or email me. --RevengeX Palpatine 02:19, 26 September 2009 (UTC)
Finished for now
taken off the Constitution banner for the hope i have completed the wiki for now.