Talk:Krizznakk "Khioo"

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Quality

Please try to avoid writing in the first person. Thanks. --RevengeX Palpatine 06:45, 9 November 2008 (MST)

  • As Rev has already said, try to avoid writing in first person view when writing a character article. If you need/want any help, contact me and I'll help you out. --Anubis 19:43, 9 November 2008 (MST)

I hope no one minds, but I fixed some misspelled words and the 1st person problem. If it is a problem, I can revert it back. --Jaredi Edius

Article name

According to your dossier, your name is "Jon Khioo". Identity crisis? --RevengeX Palpatine 09:14, 9 November 2008 (MST)

Krizznakk, I recommend writing in the third person, as in write it like someone else telling the story, not the main character. This makes it seem less like a story and more like a factual autobiography.

Dossier Existence?

Not to be a nudge or anything, but dossier 10209 does not exist. So is this a NPC or actual DB member? Phoenix d'Tana Palpatine