Talk:Cethgus Tiberius Entar: Difference between revisions

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Continuity

Certain parts of the page contradict each other. At one point, it mentions you being made a Flight Leader and resigning before the CSP House Feud, then resigning again afterwards. Were you re-appointed, or is one of these wrong? You also have your master, Impetus, being part of the jury that convicted you on murder charges, but have written her as questioning you once you returned to your House. Also, as far as that case goes, I think you should perhaps change the circumstances or the events altogether; execution would be the punishment for murder and treason - "banishment for several months" is an almost laughable punishment. - Xayun, 06/06/07

In one part you have what's basically "Cethgus got injured during the war and therefore wasn't involved that much", then you start an unrelated part, then suddenly finish that and go on to describe how Cethgus got injured during the war. Notice anything wrong? - Xayun, 09/09/07

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