Talk:Balia Donos

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The third section of this article, "Joining Arcano Signum", reads too much like a story. Try to make this section more concise by eliminating dialogue and summarizing events. If you need help, please feel free to contact me or another member of the Wiki Staff. Thanks. -- RevengeX Palpatine 09:09, 18 August 2008 (MDT)