Revision as of 23:00, 1 October 2007
Can someone please delete this page? It's no longer relevant. Thanks. --Kel 08:43, 28 May 2007 (MDT)File:Kelantar hawksymbol.jpg
Actually, Qel-Droma is also a former House of Clan Arcona that is currently closed. As such, this page should probably concern itself with the history of that House, instead of the Battleteam that was named after the closed House--Halcyon 10:32, 28 May 2007 (MDT)
- If this is a page on a past battle team then it shouldn't be deleted. Just because a team is no longer opened doesn't mean it has no place in history. You don't see people taking Julius Caesar out of encyclopedias just because he has been dead for hundreds of years ;)
Aside from that, if the old house needs an article, which it probably does, then another one should be made, unless you'd like to use this one for both the house and battleteam. Either way, the battle team still should be known about Aabs 15:06, 28 May 2007 (MDT)
The entire page is basically about the House, except for certain specifics concerning the BT. There is no written history about the BT, as it was once a continuation of the House itself, after it was closed. So probably easier to re-name it and focus on completing that portion of the history--Halcyon 15:28, 28 May 2007 (MDT)
- Ok, I have an idea, I'll just write the history of this Battle Team, and how it got closed, and I will make a special page for the house Qel-Droma --Kel 15:34, 28 May 2007 (MDT)
- Reverted edit and changed it so it is now about House Qel-Droma.
Refocus
There is way too much fluff on the "person" Qel-Droma that should be cut out. It's completely pointless. Yes, I know the house was named after him. but we don't need his life history in a nutshell here. Link to Wookieepedia.
Rename the article itself House Qel-Droma, kill the first 2 sections, check for oddities in the wording (House Arcona?), straighten out what's left to make it more clear (check for spelling/grammar), fix mistakes in coding (around a mention of Gilkane there is ]] ]] instead of [[ ]] for a link) and this might actually shape up into something decent.
For now it's a jumble of stuff that needs to be refocused. -- 