Revision as of 00:42, 11 June 2011
Please use the "Show Preview" button when updating, instead of continually saving the page--Halcyon 17:03, 4 September 2007 (MDT)
Pretty decent history thus far, although I'm not completely sure about the first section being needed. Also, throughout the whole article I would say make your pictures a little bigger, and if all else fails you may have to remove one or two of them for now --Aabs 16:20, 5 September 2007 (MDT)
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Species
This page has been added to because your species is Mandalorian which was not found during an automated search of the Wookieepedia list of Sentient species and a closer inspection by Wiki Staff is required to ensure Star Wars realism.
-- Vexxtal 06:02, 1 December 2009 (UTC)
- Confirmed. Perhaps you want "Human" from a Mandalore clan? --BenevolentWhiner 06:18, 1 December 2009 (UTC)
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Halcyon - Deputy Grand Master
TALK - 20:46, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
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There are a few issues with this article. A small issue is that Mandalorian is not a species. We assume you are human, but come from a Mandalorian clan.
Your timing as a light jedi is suspect. You were about 18 when you went to Coruscant, meaning it would have been about 27 ABY. This was the same year that Coruscant fell to the Yuuzhan Vong. I do not believe you would be undertaking these missions while in the middle of this war. You also seem to have reached "Knight" very quickly, without taking into account that it takes a number of years to reach that goal. That's barring the fact that at this point in time, you are pretty old to start your training, even in the NJO. The mission regarding the Ryll Kor is odd, as I'm pretty sure the Imperial Remnant had better things to do than infect jedi with the Krytos Virus
The timing also doesn't work, as you would have been in the DB long before 27 ABY. As you are describing your entire history in the DB, that also means you have to take into account when you actually joined the DB (which would have been around 21 or 22 ABY). You will need to really re-work your personal timeline to take all of this into account.
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