Questionable
I placed this tag on the page because your history does not seem to conform to Star Wars "reality". The type of character you appear to be creating is not really SW-related, but instead seems to be something that would come from another fantasy universe. A character in the club would be a little more "grounded" and not the undead/ghost/something else unnatural. --Halcyon (talk) 08:59, 2 December 2014 (EST)
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Furthermore, you have a lot of disallowed objects and skills. For example, you have your primary saber form down as Trakata, yet you are not an Elder or able to use this ability. You also have a white lightsaber, which I assume you don't actually own. Before adding additional content to this page, it would be beneficial for you to write it up first, then ask a wiki staffer to look over your work and correct it. Meleu Karthdo (talk) 09:30, 3 December 2014 (EST)
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ive been talking to Halc in e-mail and I think i may of had the main story stuff fixed. I forgot to change the saberstyle so ill just have it as NA for now till i can find one thats similar. (before i went rouge, it wasent only for elders, so i didnt think there was a issue) I also fixed my blade color. its super light blue where it looks almost white. my dossier even shows a light blue blade, looks almost white. again, didnt think there was a issue with white blades, only black blades were special ones... —Preceding unsigned comment added by User:Zomboie
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I think the best thing to do is to create a character sheet, so you can definitively state on this page what forms you use, how old you are/look like/race etc as the Voice team will make sure all of that is 'legal' within the Brotherhood realism spectrum. But yeah, as I said, before you add any significant amount of detail to your story (like your page says you will), create it in a googledoc first and feel free to email me or one of the other wiki staffers so we can look over it. On a side note, to get a signature, type "~" four times. Meleu Karthdo (talk) 10:02, 3 December 2014 (EST)