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Such a Desolate Place This Is
Added two images from deviantart that closely fit Severus and edited a few minor changes to the article. Images have been added with fairuse and labeled with their respective homepages.
Questionable Content
You say that your mother was a Mandalore?
http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Mandalore
If she was Mandalorian, it might be understandable, but I doubt she would be an actual Mandalore in the year 9 ABY. Also, this is more of a recommendation than something that needs to be done; but Eagles and Lions do not exist within the Star Wars Universe (snakes do). Although you can keep them, it would be more realistic do name your siblings after already canonized animals. Thanks Scyrone 22:40, 12 December 2009 (UTC)
Sorry, need to edit alot of that. Severus is a character of mine existing from a "What-if" timeline that would exist approximately 206ABY by this point of the character's development in which his mother was Mandalore, I need to edit that for this storyline. Alternatively, his siblings were named as such for the viewpoint that they are like the mythical Chimera and could've been given those names fictionally on a whim.
Although "Eagles" in their traditional sense don't exist in the Star Wars Universe, Tyferra is home to a species known as the "Vratixan Blood Eagles" and there are at least two other references to "Eagles" within Star Wars cannon; leading me to believe it's an acceptable cannon reference. Likewise the Cathar and Af'El Lion are existant within Star Wars cannon leading to a similar ideal. Non-trivial references can be removed if this is a problem however. The Mandalore referrence will be removed shortly as I need to edit portions of this quickly to ensure it is upto date and correct.
Thanks --Severus L'eonheart 04:29, 14 December 2009 (UTC)
- Thank you, the animal references are fine then. But please, in the future do not remove the tags by yourself, especially when the tag is not yet fulfilled yet (Mandalorian reference). Thanks. Scyrone 21:31, 14 December 2009 (UTC)