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Your bio is very well done and I liked it a lot. I only saw a small possible cultural problem within your bio. Tatooine is such a poor, unstabilized planet that schools and hospitals would most likely not be on the planet. Maybe a few hospitals here and there, but a school would be highly unlikely due to the fact that all the references of Tatooine refer it as a place of "lowlifes", "scum and villainy", and basically everything associated with the typical corrupted stereotypical Hutt. If you're family was even partially wealthy, I don't think they would live on a planet such as Tatooine. You provide no logical reason for them to stay on Tatooine either. It's like if the people of Alderaan were to just all move to Tatooine. It is simply unrealistic. Scyrone 02:43, 16 December 2009 (UTC)