You're going to need to remove the Das'Verd armor segment - you gave up that right when you left for CSP and now you're back but in Blue Mist, so no Soulfire Armor. --Sashar 07:33, 22 October 2008 (MDT)
I'm confused on a few things. You say that you joined in 30 ABY, when it is currently 29 ABY, and you are a Dark Jedi Knight. Also, you would only be 17 years of age. Isn't that a bit strange? And how did you find the Brotherhood? That's generally not something that's easy to do, especially if you have parents that aren't Dark Jedi (I assume there's an explanation for how you're Force Sensitive). Oh, and why do you look like Jango? ~ Legorii 20:37, 24 October 2008 (MDT)
I too am...confused, on a few things. How can you be a Dark Jedi Knight with loads of history, yet have not even joined yet. We're only in 29 ABY. Being an exact look-alike of Jango Fett and his clones isn't something you see every day. Being a mandalorian, Jango wasn't Force Sensitive. It's incredibly hard to believe that somebody who looks exactly like him and his clones, would be a Force Sensitive.
I'm not trying to go off on you or anything, really. What I do suggest, however, is taking a look at other articles that have been written (there is a large selection of featured articles) and come up with something that doesn't involve looking like a clone. Keep your join date to the time you joined in real life, and work your way up from there. Good luck in writing the new article. --Anubis 20:49, 24 October 2008 (MDT)