Talk:Lexi Sarden: Difference between revisions

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I removed the story part of the page today and added a paragraph in the more historical context so it would conform more to what Shadow was trying to explain to me. While it shortened the page considerably it brought the page closer into required specification. Again all and any help is appreciated in this. -[[User:Lexisarden|Lexi Sarden]]  13:36, 21 December 2013 (EDT)
I removed the story part of the page today and added a paragraph in the more historical context so it would conform more to what Shadow was trying to explain to me. While it shortened the page considerably it brought the page closer into required specification. Again all and any help is appreciated in this. -[[User:Lexisarden|Lexi Sarden]]  13:36, 21 December 2013 (EDT)
Another edit by myself to bring my wiki hopefully out of the quality tag soon. Again any advice is always welcome. Merry Christmas to the wiki staff! Thanks. --[[User:lexisarden| Lexi Sarden]] 11:48, 24 December 2013 (EST)

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Quality Tag

I added the quality tag because portions of your character history are written in a story format (dialogue and the like), rather than the more neutral bibliographical or encyclopedic styles utilized by the wiki. Please re-write the sections as a neutral, third-party re-telling of events in your character's past in order to have this tag removed. Thanks. --Shadow Taldrya 16:56, 16 December 2013 (MST)

I removed the story part of the page today and added a paragraph in the more historical context so it would conform more to what Shadow was trying to explain to me. While it shortened the page considerably it brought the page closer into required specification. Again all and any help is appreciated in this. -Lexi Sarden 13:36, 21 December 2013 (EDT)

Another edit by myself to bring my wiki hopefully out of the quality tag soon. Again any advice is always welcome. Merry Christmas to the wiki staff! Thanks. -- Lexi Sarden 11:48, 24 December 2013 (EST)