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Maybe I know nothing about Star Wars, but I find it fairly doubtful that you studied with the Aing-Tii and the Fallanassi. Perhaps you would like to elaborate on those sections or just take them out entirely. -- RevengeX Palpatine 14:45, 18 October 2007 (MDT)
Also, for general histories, it's usually best to stay away from directly interacting with "main" characters in the SW universe. Being taught directly by Luke Skywalker and going on missions with him and so on. Fallen jedi is fine. Going on missions with one of the most famous character in all of SW is not really within the bounds of "realism"--Halcyon 17:24, 18 October 2007 (MDT)
I think I fixed these problems. Thanks for corrections.
-Viv