Talk:Seridan Brehevik

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Quality

Reasons for the addition of the "Quality" tag on your article:

  • The character summary and most of the history is lacking in links to other pages and wookieepedia. The character summary paragraphs are also extremely long...
  • The inclusion of dialogue, even when using the Quote template, is not fitting with the standard wiki layout. Specifically referencing the journal entry. Anything contained in such an entry should be described in third-person, biographical format. Example: The journal described Seridan blah blah blah.
  • You have a lot of text in the Pre-Brotherhood History portion of your wiki, but no images. Whereas the Activity with the Brotherhood portion has two large images and far less text. May want to spread the images out better.

--Shadow Taldrya 19:36, 14 March 2014 (MDT)