Minor updates to the Character and DB facts - Eludajae 2:25 am 25/10/2007
You don't need to note what you've done here on the Discussion page, it's already documented in the history. Thanks --Tron 17:20, 25 October 2007 (MDT)
Removed by Eludajae 11:56 1/8/2008
Revert?
After speaking with Eludajae, we decided the character still had a role to play, and would probably benefit from a proper page to link to. I've never done a revert before, could a staff member do it so I don't mess anything up please? Impie 15:50, 9 January 2008 (MST)
Rolled back to the last edit Eludajae made before the erasingness. Also put her in the rogue category as per what her dossier told me. --Shadow Taldrya 18:19, 9 January 2008 (MST)
Major Editing and updating now that I am active again- Eludajae 4:28PM 25/01/2008
Section Decree of Knighthood added, template information added,Eludajae /01/28/2007 12:18PM
Section Dark Passions Revealed added, minor edits for wording, Eludajae 02/03/2008 08:56PM
New Picture added to the right top as it was requested by several if I could place a more SW or Dark Jedi oriented picture for my character. Well I believe that new picture complies with the request. Eludajae 12:03PM, 22 April 2008 (EST)
I apologize for the double save hit, but I noticed 7 miss spelled words and the Grammar Nazi in me took hold and I had to correct it. i.g. several miss spellings were corrected. Eludajae 12:39PM, 22 April 2008 (EST)
Show Preview
Please use the Show Preview button before hitting Save page so as not to pile up a number of edits. Thanks --Tron 18:55, 25 January 2008 (MST)
Tron question, should I not edit section by section then? Just click edit for the whole page and make the edits? I use Show Preview as much as possible I promise I do. Eludajae 12;15, 28/01/2008
Section by section is just as many - by using the button you can make one edit, look over the article, see where another needs done, edit, look over, edit, and so on. This makes it so only one actual edit shows up though you may have completed several edits in reality. It helps us when sifting through the Recent Changes to see where we need to help someone. --Tron 14:51, 29 January 2008 (MST)
Article/Outstanding Achievements
Perhaps the beginning of this article could be changed to fall into line with the set format for character articles. The threat dossier really isn't needed, nor the part right under Character History that says where and when you were born since that is in the infobox to the right.
Also, keep in mind that this is not a replacement for your dossier on djb.com, so under Outstanding Achievements you don't list rank promotions, medals earned or SA courses that you passed. --Tron 15:26, 14 October 2008 (MDT)
- Side Note: Synthahol is in Star Trek only, not in Star Wars - you'll never hear it mentioned here.
- Note: I did move the Threat Dossier down into the Character Summery and removed the extra doubled information you noted. Leaving the qoute from Palpatine where it was. Letting us both have what we wanted you wanted it removed and I wanted it kept, so I moved it to a more acceptable location. However as for the Synthahol...there is a name for the blue stuff they drink in the bars it has obviously eluded me...could you instead of just pointing out its incorrect, give me a proper SW name for their synthetic alcohol? However, I believe it was used in A New Hope prior to the remastering of it.
As far as the achievements, I would agree with you if I have the lengthy career that you have and such things as your Knighthood and first Eleveation to E1 no longer mean that much to you. To me they are milestones in my DB career, as are my two first merit medals. When I have the plethera of positions held that you list in your wiki I will be happy to remove them. Its all relative hon.
--Eludajae 6:27, 14 October 2008 (MDT)