Talk:Vai Azexel

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Your involvement with cannon characters is very questionable. --Tron 17:56, 29 May 2008 (MDT)

My Lord

Let me attempt resolve these questionable points.

  • Regarding being at the Jedi Praxeum. It is possible that my character could have encountered the Jedi at the Praxeum prior to the second battle of the Jedi Praxeum. He would fight aside the Jedi there and escape.
  • Regarding the "Mission to Myrkr", the Solo siblings were the major cannon characters listed; however, the mission did include 17 Jedi Knights and it is feasible that my character could have been one of these Jedi Knights.
  • Regarding knowing Vergere, yes that is questionable and I will rewrite that part of my characters story to follow cannon closer.

If there is anything else that is questionable please let me know so I can make the appropriate response or change.

Vai Azexel 15:27, 30 May 2008 (MDT)

Hey, Vai, just some advice from a fellow house summit and consistent wiki user - I've noticed that your article contains some dialogue and story-like elements. Remember that wiki articles are meant to be like an encyclopedia, not an autobiography. So you may want to revise your article's structure somewhat to give it a more professional air. -Ronovi, 17:58, 30 September 2009 (PST)

Imageless

The tag {{imageless}} was added because despite an image in the character template, it has no other images. Images bring articles to life. Good job so far though, keep it up. --Tron 21:53, 2 October 2009 (UTC)

Minor Edit: Updated Character Information - removed Aedile status Vai Azexel 17:11, 21 October 2009 (UTC)

Major Update - Reworded story to be less autobiograhical and added more images. Vai Azexel 20:43, 21 October 2009 (UTC)