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| Following the [[Guidelines]] of the DJB Wiki, our character articles are not replacements for our dossiers. What this means that no awards/medals/shadow academy courses should be listed on the page. --[[User:Anubis Wrath|Anubis]] 19:34, 11 December 2008 (MST) | | Following the [[Guidelines]] of the DJB Wiki, our character articles are not replacements for our dossiers. What this means that no awards/medals/shadow academy courses should be listed on the page. --[[User:Anubis Wrath|Anubis]] 19:34, 11 December 2008 (MST) |
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| | In your article you mention that you had a farm that sold product to processing plants and then to other worlds. I believe it was possible to do that, but the government of Almania was a Nazi-like, destructive, poor government. Why would they let someone who has a farm have the potential to get more money than they do? The Je'har weren't all that nice. |
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| | You also mention Mandalorian Raiders attacked your home and killed all your family. Why would a random group of raiders kill all your family? There have been instances of Mandalorians raiding people, but they wouldn't kill them unless they were armed and fighting back. It just seems too random to just happen all of a sudden for no reason. |
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| | Also, with no official training in the force, you beat a lone Padawan, searching specifically for you, and merely in a fit of rage you knocked him out? It seems a little bit god-modded. Someone who has been trained by powerful Jedi, who has a lightsaber, and whose force training is significantly higher than yours, I just don't see how it could be possible for you to merely get into a fit of rage because some kid tried to stop you from escaping from a planet. |
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| | You should probably look over your bio a bit, and show more of your history and how things happened. My source: |
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| | http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Almania |
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| | [[User:Scyrone|Scyrone]] 20:44, 21 December 2009 (UTC) |
Latest revision as of 20:44, 21 December 2009
Awards
Following the Guidelines of the DJB Wiki, our character articles are not replacements for our dossiers. What this means that no awards/medals/shadow academy courses should be listed on the page. --Anubis 19:34, 11 December 2008 (MST)
Questionable Content
In your article you mention that you had a farm that sold product to processing plants and then to other worlds. I believe it was possible to do that, but the government of Almania was a Nazi-like, destructive, poor government. Why would they let someone who has a farm have the potential to get more money than they do? The Je'har weren't all that nice.
You also mention Mandalorian Raiders attacked your home and killed all your family. Why would a random group of raiders kill all your family? There have been instances of Mandalorians raiding people, but they wouldn't kill them unless they were armed and fighting back. It just seems too random to just happen all of a sudden for no reason.
Also, with no official training in the force, you beat a lone Padawan, searching specifically for you, and merely in a fit of rage you knocked him out? It seems a little bit god-modded. Someone who has been trained by powerful Jedi, who has a lightsaber, and whose force training is significantly higher than yours, I just don't see how it could be possible for you to merely get into a fit of rage because some kid tried to stop you from escaping from a planet.
You should probably look over your bio a bit, and show more of your history and how things happened. My source:
http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Almania
Scyrone 20:44, 21 December 2009 (UTC)