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== Character History ==
== Character History ==
Dismal was very happy in a wealthy family on the rather large planet of Enriton. His father was Count of the Enriton System, doing anything to please his one and only son. Dismal was very traumatized as his father died when he was 13. He died of a wide spread disease that happened when the local scientists experimented with horrible chemicals. The waste was poured around the base of the tree containing the Count's palace.
One day in 3 ABY, a baby boy was born to the leader of the Enriton System, Count Saudu. Saudu was pleased to have his only child be a male, so he could inherit to throne when he died, which would come sooner than expected. The Count gave his son anything he wanted. Dismal wanted to be a skilled warrior, so his father hired various Pilots and Weapon Experts to hone the skills of Dismal. Dismal spent most of his days learning the secrets of sparring and piloting, and hand to hand combat. He was a very skilled warrior indeed by the age of 10. Dismal lived happily for the next few years of his life. Hunting local fauna, sparring with his old man, life was good. But, this was soon to change.  


This prestigious position of power was now open for grabs. Dismal campaigned the whole system for him to be elected as Count, to carry on the royal family. Most of the civilians thought 13 was too young of an age to lead, so his fathers First General took over. He took everything, even married the late Counts wife. Dismal felt betrayed, so he went into hiding on the edge of the capital, where he built a small house and plotted his revenge to regain his place and status. The General ruled with an Iron Fist.
===A Change of Life
When Dismal was 13, a fledging man, something terrible happened to his father. Scientists had been experimenting with chemicals to make a cure for a disease that had been spreading the last couple of weeks. The team failed miserably, resulting in a slimy, radioactive toxic waste. The scientists went into the canopy of the heavy woods that engulf Enriton, to dispose of the failed experiment. What they did not know, was that they had poured this toxic waste on the base of the tree containing the Royal Palace. Dismal and his mother were out having dinner on one of the local restaurants, but Count Saudu had to stay at home and finish some paper work. Dismal's father died a slow death that evening, and when Dismal and his mother returned home that evening, the two found the corpse of the Count lying on the floor in his office. The two were crushed.


Dismal started feeling his first connections to the force when he was in Exile. He heard of a Dark Brotherhood on the planet of Antei. He went there in hopes to learn how to gain ultimate power. As he learned the basics of the Dark Side of the Force, he then returned to his home planet of Enriton.He found the Count's Palace. He used the Force to push aside his meek bodyguards. Dismal called upon the power of the force to lift him off of his bed, and restrain his windpipe to cut off his oxygen supply, thus killing him. Dismal then declared himself Count of the entire Enriton System.
After many greiving visitor's and family, the need for a new Count arose. Instead of automatically coronating the heir, as is tradition, the citizens had an election, seeing as the heir was young. This did not crush Dismal's want to have his father's position, as he ran for this prestigious office. Dismal was soon about to be crushed for the second time in his young life.  


After suffering years of torment, the people of Enriton were happy to bring back the old style of leadership. He moved into the family palace. He threw the dead General's body into his fireplace, and enjoyed watching it burn. He was thrilled and delighted to have his family's power back at grasp. The change from iron fisted dictation to peaceful rule was a relief to the people of Enriton. There was much trade, much less crime, and overall prosperity, which the land of Enriton is still prospering today.
Dismal's competitor, General Saito, won the election, because Enriton's citizen's thought they could not leavy their lives in the hands of a 13 year old. General Saito gladly took this position, of which he envied his old friend Saudu for attaining. Saito did not keep his promise to lead in the ways of the late count, as he ruled with an Iron Fist, basically turning the system into a dictatorship. He also took everything the Saudu owned, even his wife.  


Dismal still holds his title of Count, but often goes to the DB to continue in his training. His beloved friend, Commander of the Bodyguard, serves as Count while he is away, but Dismal still holds the official title of Count and Ruler.
===Exiled===
After Dismal lost his election, he exiled himself from the palace. He took only the basics needed to survive, and he travelled deep into the undisturbed forest. He built a shack in the branches of a large tree, and lived there for a few months before feeling something he had never felt before.
 
Dismal had realized that when he had extreme emotions, amazing would happen. A piece of wood floating in mid air, things falling for no apparent reason. But, what he hadnt realized, was that in his rage, Dismal was feeling his first connections to the Force.
 
Dismal decided that Enriton holds too many bad memories, so he immediately left in the one thing he managed to keep from General Saito, his fathers Corvette, The Gamerunner. He travelled to the planet of Anobis in search of work, where he attained a farming job with a steady income. On one of his rare trips to the city, Dismal dined at a place known as "Retre's Diner", and an accident let loose. The droid waitress had brought him the wrong food, and he got angry, and used the force to knock the plate over. This event led to a monumentous event.
 
===A New Home===
After Dismal left, a mysterious cloaked figure approached him and said, "I saw what you did in there. Do you like power?" Dismal of course replied yes, and the figure took him under his wing. Dismal took him to his home, and the two boarded The Gamerunner, and took off for a new destination. The figure, onboard the ship, shot Dismal with a tranquilizing dart. The next thing he knew, he was awake on a shuttle to the Shadow Academy on a place named Onderon.
 
==Dark Brotherhood Life==
===A Jedi is Born===
When Dismal graduated the Shadow Academy, he was placed into Clan Plagueis, and House Exar Kun. It was then that he was assigned to a person named Jaysen Erdon for care. Dismal quickly rose through the ranks of the Dark Brotherhood, and he is still doing that today.
 
===New Assignment===
When Dismal reached the rank of Protector, he was informed that Jaysen was not caring for him anymore, and that he was to be placed in the arms of a master, which happened to be Krath Archpriest Scorpius. Dismal has worked with Scorpius hard, and he has attained the rank of Jedi Hunter.
 
===Commander Status===
On the date of October 4, 2006, Dismal was named Sith Commander of the Exar's Shadow squadron, the protectors of House Exar Kun. Dismal still has this status today.


== Positions Held ==
== Positions Held ==
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* Assistant Envoy and Rollmaster of House Exar Kun
* Assistant Envoy and Rollmaster of House Exar Kun
* Esquire to the city of Glasir
* Esquire to the city of Glasir
==Revenge==
One day, Dismal left the Brotherhood on a Leave of Absence. He returned to his home town on Enriton, where he approached the Royal Palace in his cloak, armed only with a Sith Sword. Dismal killed every guard with his Rutilus Trucido, and after the last guard was silenced, he crept into the quarters of Count Saito. "This is for stealing my rightful place," Dismal said as he curled his hands in the air, and the Count's windpipe closed. When he was finally dead, Dismal threw his body out of the window, and declared himself Count.
===Leaving===
Dismal holds the Count title today, but when he is away to the Dark Brotherhood, which is almost all the time, he has given his best friend, Lt. Captain John, commander of the royal guard, unofficial title of Count. Dismal returns twice a year to check up on things, and make sure there are no problems.


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Revision as of 18:52, 14 October 2006

Dismal is a Journeyman quickly rising throught he ranks of the Dark Brotherhood.

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Character History

One day in 3 ABY, a baby boy was born to the leader of the Enriton System, Count Saudu. Saudu was pleased to have his only child be a male, so he could inherit to throne when he died, which would come sooner than expected. The Count gave his son anything he wanted. Dismal wanted to be a skilled warrior, so his father hired various Pilots and Weapon Experts to hone the skills of Dismal. Dismal spent most of his days learning the secrets of sparring and piloting, and hand to hand combat. He was a very skilled warrior indeed by the age of 10. Dismal lived happily for the next few years of his life. Hunting local fauna, sparring with his old man, life was good. But, this was soon to change.

===A Change of Life When Dismal was 13, a fledging man, something terrible happened to his father. Scientists had been experimenting with chemicals to make a cure for a disease that had been spreading the last couple of weeks. The team failed miserably, resulting in a slimy, radioactive toxic waste. The scientists went into the canopy of the heavy woods that engulf Enriton, to dispose of the failed experiment. What they did not know, was that they had poured this toxic waste on the base of the tree containing the Royal Palace. Dismal and his mother were out having dinner on one of the local restaurants, but Count Saudu had to stay at home and finish some paper work. Dismal's father died a slow death that evening, and when Dismal and his mother returned home that evening, the two found the corpse of the Count lying on the floor in his office. The two were crushed.

After many greiving visitor's and family, the need for a new Count arose. Instead of automatically coronating the heir, as is tradition, the citizens had an election, seeing as the heir was young. This did not crush Dismal's want to have his father's position, as he ran for this prestigious office. Dismal was soon about to be crushed for the second time in his young life.

Dismal's competitor, General Saito, won the election, because Enriton's citizen's thought they could not leavy their lives in the hands of a 13 year old. General Saito gladly took this position, of which he envied his old friend Saudu for attaining. Saito did not keep his promise to lead in the ways of the late count, as he ruled with an Iron Fist, basically turning the system into a dictatorship. He also took everything the Saudu owned, even his wife.

Exiled

After Dismal lost his election, he exiled himself from the palace. He took only the basics needed to survive, and he travelled deep into the undisturbed forest. He built a shack in the branches of a large tree, and lived there for a few months before feeling something he had never felt before.

Dismal had realized that when he had extreme emotions, amazing would happen. A piece of wood floating in mid air, things falling for no apparent reason. But, what he hadnt realized, was that in his rage, Dismal was feeling his first connections to the Force.

Dismal decided that Enriton holds too many bad memories, so he immediately left in the one thing he managed to keep from General Saito, his fathers Corvette, The Gamerunner. He travelled to the planet of Anobis in search of work, where he attained a farming job with a steady income. On one of his rare trips to the city, Dismal dined at a place known as "Retre's Diner", and an accident let loose. The droid waitress had brought him the wrong food, and he got angry, and used the force to knock the plate over. This event led to a monumentous event.

A New Home

After Dismal left, a mysterious cloaked figure approached him and said, "I saw what you did in there. Do you like power?" Dismal of course replied yes, and the figure took him under his wing. Dismal took him to his home, and the two boarded The Gamerunner, and took off for a new destination. The figure, onboard the ship, shot Dismal with a tranquilizing dart. The next thing he knew, he was awake on a shuttle to the Shadow Academy on a place named Onderon.

Dark Brotherhood Life

A Jedi is Born

When Dismal graduated the Shadow Academy, he was placed into Clan Plagueis, and House Exar Kun. It was then that he was assigned to a person named Jaysen Erdon for care. Dismal quickly rose through the ranks of the Dark Brotherhood, and he is still doing that today.

New Assignment

When Dismal reached the rank of Protector, he was informed that Jaysen was not caring for him anymore, and that he was to be placed in the arms of a master, which happened to be Krath Archpriest Scorpius. Dismal has worked with Scorpius hard, and he has attained the rank of Jedi Hunter.

Commander Status

On the date of October 4, 2006, Dismal was named Sith Commander of the Exar's Shadow squadron, the protectors of House Exar Kun. Dismal still has this status today.

Positions Held

Commander of Exar's Shadow (10/04/06-Present)


Trivia

  • Dismal is count of the Enriton System
  • Dismal owns his own ship, a heavily modified Correllian Corvette which he named 'The Gamerunner'
  • Apprentice to Rob Scorpius
  • Sith Commander of the Battleteam Exar's Shadow
  • Assistant Envoy and Rollmaster of House Exar Kun
  • Esquire to the city of Glasir

Revenge

One day, Dismal left the Brotherhood on a Leave of Absence. He returned to his home town on Enriton, where he approached the Royal Palace in his cloak, armed only with a Sith Sword. Dismal killed every guard with his Rutilus Trucido, and after the last guard was silenced, he crept into the quarters of Count Saito. "This is for stealing my rightful place," Dismal said as he curled his hands in the air, and the Count's windpipe closed. When he was finally dead, Dismal threw his body out of the window, and declared himself Count.

Leaving

Dismal holds the Count title today, but when he is away to the Dark Brotherhood, which is almost all the time, he has given his best friend, Lt. Captain John, commander of the royal guard, unofficial title of Count. Dismal returns twice a year to check up on things, and make sure there are no problems.