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| According to [http://www.darkjedibrotherhood.com/dbjedi/dossier.asp?ID=10209 your dossier], your name is "Jon Khioo". Identity crisis? --[[User:RevengeX|RevengeX Palpatine]] 09:14, 9 November 2008 (MST) | | According to [http://www.darkjedibrotherhood.com/dbjedi/dossier.asp?ID=10209 your dossier], your name is "Jon Khioo". Identity crisis? --[[User:RevengeX|RevengeX Palpatine]] 09:14, 9 November 2008 (MST) |
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Please try to avoid writing in the first person. Thanks. --RevengeX Palpatine 06:45, 9 November 2008 (MST)
- As Rev has already said, try to avoid writing in first person view when writing a character article. If you need/want any help, contact me and I'll help you out. --Anubis 19:43, 9 November 2008 (MST)
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According to your dossier, your name is "Jon Khioo". Identity crisis? --RevengeX Palpatine 09:14, 9 November 2008 (MST)
Krizznakk, I recommend writing in the third person, as in write it like someone else telling the story, not the main character. This makes it seem less like a story and more like a factual autobiography.