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| Another edit by myself to bring my wiki hopefully out of the quality tag soon. Again any advice is always welcome. Merry Christmas to the wiki staff! Thanks. --[[User:lexisarden| Lexi Sarden]] 11:48, 24 December 2013 (EST) | | Another edit by myself to bring my wiki hopefully out of the quality tag soon. Again any advice is always welcome. Merry Christmas to the wiki staff! Thanks. --[[User:lexisarden| Lexi Sarden]] 11:48, 24 December 2013 (EST) |
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| | Good work, Lexi. Looks a lot better. Aside from finishing off any history or DB facts you want to add, the article would benefit from additional images to help break up the text. Even re-using existing images like the Arcona logo, or shots of your homeplanet, robes, or lightsabers (if you have one or when you get one). Hope that helps. --[[User:Shadow Taldrya|Shadow Taldrya]] 22:13, 24 December 2013 (MST) |
Revision as of 05:13, 25 December 2013
Quality Tag
I added the quality tag because portions of your character history are written in a story format (dialogue and the like), rather than the more neutral bibliographical or encyclopedic styles utilized by the wiki. Please re-write the sections as a neutral, third-party re-telling of events in your character's past in order to have this tag removed. Thanks. --Shadow Taldrya 16:56, 16 December 2013 (MST)
I removed the story part of the page today and added a paragraph in the more historical context so it would conform more to what Shadow was trying to explain to me. While it shortened the page considerably it brought the page closer into required specification. Again all and any help is appreciated in this. -Lexi Sarden 13:36, 21 December 2013 (EDT)
Another edit by myself to bring my wiki hopefully out of the quality tag soon. Again any advice is always welcome. Merry Christmas to the wiki staff! Thanks. -- Lexi Sarden 11:48, 24 December 2013 (EST)
Good work, Lexi. Looks a lot better. Aside from finishing off any history or DB facts you want to add, the article would benefit from additional images to help break up the text. Even re-using existing images like the Arcona logo, or shots of your homeplanet, robes, or lightsabers (if you have one or when you get one). Hope that helps. --Shadow Taldrya 22:13, 24 December 2013 (MST)