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| Second, we generally don't use "fake" DB members in our histories. So having a mentor as part of the DB, but never actually existed, probably shouldn't be on your wiki. Overall, I am wondering if perhaps you should focus on perhaps joining the "real" Jedi Academy and training there for a few years. Some sort of trauma may occur during that time to push you towards a darker path and into the DB itself. You can still keep your mentor, but the initial location would change. I think that would make a lot more sense for you overall, especially as you wished to focus on the healing-aspects early on}} | | Second, we generally don't use "fake" DB members in our histories. So having a mentor as part of the DB, but never actually existed, probably shouldn't be on your wiki. Overall, I am wondering if perhaps you should focus on perhaps joining the "real" Jedi Academy and training there for a few years. Some sort of trauma may occur during that time to push you towards a darker path and into the DB itself. You can still keep your mentor, but the initial location would change. I think that would make a lot more sense for you overall, especially as you wished to focus on the healing-aspects early on}} |
| | {{HalcTalk|time=[[User:Halcyon|Halcyon]] 19:30, 9 August 2011 (UTC)|text=Tag has been removed. Update was well done and your characters fits in much better now}} |
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