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| * You have a lot of text in the Pre-Brotherhood History portion of your wiki, but no images. Whereas the Activity with the Brotherhood portion has two large images and far less text. May want to spread the images out better. | | * You have a lot of text in the Pre-Brotherhood History portion of your wiki, but no images. Whereas the Activity with the Brotherhood portion has two large images and far less text. May want to spread the images out better. |
| --[[User:Shadow Taldrya|Shadow Taldrya]] 19:36, 14 March 2014 (MDT) | | --[[User:Shadow Taldrya|Shadow Taldrya]] 19:36, 14 March 2014 (MDT) |
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| | I've updated the page, paying specific attention to your notes above. I think I have improved it according to the criteria above, therefore I will be removing the 'Quality' tag. If any admin disagrees, feel free to put it back on there. |
| | --[[User:Seridan Brehevik|Seridan]] 21:10, 2 May 2014 (GMT) |
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| | :Looks great, Seridan. Nice work. --[[User:Shadow Taldrya|Shadow Taldrya]] 19:32, 2 May 2014 (MDT) |
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| | Thanks Shadow for moving my wiki article to 'Seridan Brehevik' :) |
| | --[[User:Seridan Brehevik|Seridan]] 22:05, 13 June 2014 (GMT) |
Latest revision as of 21:09, 13 June 2014
Quality
Reasons for the addition of the "Quality" tag on your article:
- The character summary and most of the history is lacking in links to other pages and wookieepedia. The character summary paragraphs are also extremely long...
- The inclusion of dialogue, even when using the Quote template, is not fitting with the standard wiki layout. Specifically referencing the journal entry. Anything contained in such an entry should be described in third-person, biographical format. Example: The journal described Seridan blah blah blah.
- You have a lot of text in the Pre-Brotherhood History portion of your wiki, but no images. Whereas the Activity with the Brotherhood portion has two large images and far less text. May want to spread the images out better.
--Shadow Taldrya 19:36, 14 March 2014 (MDT)
I've updated the page, paying specific attention to your notes above. I think I have improved it according to the criteria above, therefore I will be removing the 'Quality' tag. If any admin disagrees, feel free to put it back on there.
--Seridan 21:10, 2 May 2014 (GMT)
- Looks great, Seridan. Nice work. --Shadow Taldrya 19:32, 2 May 2014 (MDT)
Thanks Shadow for moving my wiki article to 'Seridan Brehevik' :)
--Seridan 22:05, 13 June 2014 (GMT)