Talk:Lexi Sarden

Quality Tag

I added the quality tag because portions of your character history are written in a story format (dialogue and the like), rather than the more neutral bibliographical or encyclopedic styles utilized by the wiki. Please re-write the sections as a neutral, third-party re-telling of events in your character's past in order to have this tag removed. Thanks. --Shadow Taldrya 16:56, 16 December 2013 (MST)

I removed the story part of the page today and added a paragraph in the more historical context so it would conform more to what Shadow was trying to explain to me. While it shortened the page considerably it brought the page closer into required specification. Again all and any help is appreciated in this. -Lexi Sarden 13:36, 21 December 2013 (EDT)

Another edit by myself to bring my wiki hopefully out of the quality tag soon. Again any advice is always welcome. Merry Christmas to the wiki staff! Thanks. -- Lexi Sarden 11:48, 24 December 2013 (EST)

Good work, Lexi. Looks a lot better. Aside from finishing off any history or DB facts you want to add, the article would benefit from additional images to help break up the text. Even re-using existing images like the Arcona logo, or shots of your homeplanet, robes, or lightsabers (if you have one or when you get one). Hope that helps. --Shadow Taldrya 22:13, 24 December 2013 (MST)

I added a picture in the Personality section of the wiki page to add to the pages looks as Shadow suggested, I will have to find a good shot of Balmorra, and I have a few other pictures in the works, and I will add a few more when I get them so I am not updating the page over and over causing a slew of updates coming to you. Again Shadow thank you so much for your advice. -- Lexi Sarden 12:35, 24 December 2013 (EST)

I am so sorry about this last update, I completely forgot to put the dossier code onto the page so is shows up on my dossier, I am really sorry about the mulitple update hits tonight. I will do better next time and try and get all the updates done in one edit -- Lexi Sarden 12:42, 24 December 2013 (EST)

Added the various pictures of Balmorra, the Shadow Academy and my warbanner to my page as adviced my Shadow to make it have some more flavor to it.-- Lexi Sarden 13:08, 28 December 2013 (EST)

Added Knighthood section with my saber, picture uploaded with the fairuse tag and LS category noted, fiction written for the knighthood is by Cethgus as it appears in the announcement letter of my Knighthood in the DJB.- Lexi Sarden 11:18, 30 December 2013 (EST).