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I don't believe so. The holocrons you mention all basically explain old, forgotten and obscure teachings (such as saber forms, rituals, etc.). Something that would give a Clan an edge against the others. This one is basically a journal and only explains the Unifying Force concept(so no mystical rituals or overpowering topics). It's just a means for me to easily explain my story in an interesting and fun way. And as I understood Wookiepedia, they were pretty common before the Purge (when Palpatine raided the Temple). --[[Tyren Atema|Tyren]] 08:02, 13 July 2012 (CET)
I don't believe so. The holocrons you mention all basically explain old, forgotten and obscure teachings (such as saber forms, rituals, etc.). Something that would give a Clan an edge against the others. This one is basically a journal and only explains the Unifying Force concept(so no mystical rituals or overpowering topics). It's just a means for me to easily explain my story in an interesting and fun way. And as I understood Wookiepedia, they were pretty common before the Purge (when Palpatine raided the Temple). --[[Tyren Atema|Tyren]] 08:02, 13 July 2012 (CET)
== Changes ==
After talking to several esteemed members about this issue, I decided [[User:Halcyon|Halc]] was right so i changed the article to fit. I left the holocron template (since it fits) but removed any reference to a holocron device.
Please inform me if anything still needs changing. --[[Tyren Atema|Tyren]] 22:51, 17 July 2012 (CET)
* Looks good.  Took away the tag --[[User:Halcyon|Halcyon]] 19:17, 17 July 2012 (MDT)

Latest revision as of 01:17, 18 July 2012

Questionable

This whole article is very questionable as no one should have their own personal holocron in the DB. The Clans and Houses cannot create their own holocrons, but instead must be earned and awarded to them as official possessions. No person would have such a possession --Halcyon 19:48, 12 July 2012 (MDT)

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I don't believe so. The holocrons you mention all basically explain old, forgotten and obscure teachings (such as saber forms, rituals, etc.). Something that would give a Clan an edge against the others. This one is basically a journal and only explains the Unifying Force concept(so no mystical rituals or overpowering topics). It's just a means for me to easily explain my story in an interesting and fun way. And as I understood Wookiepedia, they were pretty common before the Purge (when Palpatine raided the Temple). --Tyren 08:02, 13 July 2012 (CET)

Changes

After talking to several esteemed members about this issue, I decided Halc was right so i changed the article to fit. I left the holocron template (since it fits) but removed any reference to a holocron device. Please inform me if anything still needs changing. --Tyren 22:51, 17 July 2012 (CET)

  • Looks good. Took away the tag --Halcyon 19:17, 17 July 2012 (MDT)