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[[User:Vai Azexel|Vai Azexel]] 15:27, 30 May 2008 (MDT)
[[User:Vai Azexel|Vai Azexel]] 15:27, 30 May 2008 (MDT)
Hey, Vai, just some advice from a fellow house summit and consistent wiki user - I've noticed that your article contains some dialogue and story-like elements. Remember that wiki articles are meant to be like an encyclopedia, not an autobiography. So you may want to revise your article's structure somewhat to give it a more professional air. -[[User:Ronovi Tavisaen|Ronovi]], 17:58, 30 September 2009 (PST)

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Your involvement with cannon characters is very questionable. --Tron 17:56, 29 May 2008 (MDT)

My Lord

Let me attempt resolve these questionable points.

  • Regarding being at the Jedi Praxeum. It is possible that my character could have encountered the Jedi at the Praxeum prior to the second battle of the Jedi Praxeum. He would fight aside the Jedi there and escape.
  • Regarding the "Mission to Myrkr", the Solo siblings were the major cannon characters listed; however, the mission did include 17 Jedi Knights and it is feasible that my character could have been one of these Jedi Knights.
  • Regarding knowing Vergere, yes that is questionable and I will rewrite that part of my characters story to follow cannon closer.

If there is anything else that is questionable please let me know so I can make the appropriate response or change.

Vai Azexel 15:27, 30 May 2008 (MDT)

Hey, Vai, just some advice from a fellow house summit and consistent wiki user - I've noticed that your article contains some dialogue and story-like elements. Remember that wiki articles are meant to be like an encyclopedia, not an autobiography. So you may want to revise your article's structure somewhat to give it a more professional air. -Ronovi, 17:58, 30 September 2009 (PST)