Talk:Saal Kesyk

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Quality Tag

Quality tag has been added to this article for the following reasons: 1) Quotes are limited to one per section and should be directly under the heading, not placed throughout the body text. This is found in the "A Knight Rises" section of the page. 2) Your "Fighting Styles" section is unnecessary. You've already listed your chosen fighting styles (out of date considering new character sheets, btw), so there's no need to re-list them. If you wish to expand on the section to write about how Incendus mastered these styles of combat, then that would be fine. But no point-form lists. Once at the top is fine. Once these issues have been addressed, a member of the Wiki Staff will remove the Quality tag from this article.

Also, unrelated to the Quality tag, I've added a Construction tag to the top of your article as it's still under construction. There's no need to add the Construction tag to various sections. --Shadow Taldrya (talk) 00:41, 30 October 2014 (EDT)