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When he woke up, he was in the exile ship. Not knowing what was going on he ask what was going on. The exile laughed and told him about the force. " the force is a gift and you are using it the wrong way, I'm going to teach you and in return you are going to work for me or die." So with no choice he began his training. His job was simple, where he went, Rangel would go get the exile credits or die. So the excile was like a collector. As his power grew more mature, so did the dark side and then the drinking began.
When he woke up, he was in the exile ship. Not knowing what was going on he ask what was going on. The exile laughed and told him about the force. " the force is a gift and you are using it the wrong way, I'm going to teach you and in return you are going to work for me or die." So with no choice he began his training. His job was simple, where he went, Rangel would go get the exile credits or die. So the excile was like a collector. As his power grew more mature, so did the dark side and then the drinking began.


===Force Control===
===A Father's Debt===
Rangel would try to focus on how many beers he drank and how much liqour he could handdle while using the force. The exile send Rangel to Narr Shadda for a debt to pick up for him. What he didn't know was that he was going to meet his father again. Soon after landing in the moon, he made his way to the cantina first for a few drinks. He did a little of pazzak and went of his business. The location was in the cantina where there was an elevator to ger to the bulding behind the cantina.
 
As he went to the top floor he could sence something wrong. So he prepared himself for battle. As the doors opened he could not believe who he saw. His father was sitting in a big office, very luxurious, very expensive place. His father had cleaned himself very well,  he walked towards Rangel and hugged him. Asking where and why did he run away so long ago. Rangel angrily just asked for the debt that he owed to the exile. The father with angry words told Rangel "would you like to know how your mother died". Rangel quickly stuck his father in his face, his father force pushed rangel to the wall. As he got up his father spoke " I too have been training my self , now get up and fight me I can feel your anger growing." His father threw him a sword as he pulled the other of the wall. Both men struck each other's sword on and on all you could hear in the room was the air getting cut by the blades. Throwing each other againts the walls of the office in minutes the alarms went off signaling the security. Rangel had to finish him fast. But with the strength of his father overwhelming his own Rangel knew he could not rely on strength, but the force. His father had kicked him and used force lightning on him. As Rangel was yelling at the top of his lungs his father told him that he sounded like his mother when she died. Rangel quickly returned the lightning back. His father jumped back up after that return. One last sword fight. As he picked up the sword Rangel quickly picked up his sword and threw it to his father using the force. The intensity of the force pushed him out the window. As he fell of the top of the floor of a 100 floor building he landed in the middle of the cantina. Rangel reached into his desk and grabbed the bags of credits that were in there. He made his way down the elevator thinking to himself how could he kill his own father. When the doors opened troopers where out there waiting for him. The troopers arested Rangel for the murder of his father Dr. Rangel Doc.


===Telosian Jedi Academy===
===Telosian Jedi Academy===

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Rangel
Biographical Information
Homeworld:

Nar Shaddaa

Date of Birth:

Template:Birthyear and Age (ABY)

Physical Description
Species:

Human

Gender:

Male

Height:

5'-9"

Weight:

180lbs

Hair:

Black

Eyes:

Brown

Personal Information
Allies:
Enemies:

His own father

Chronology & Political Information
Profession:

Electrician, welder, engine repairman

Era(s):

Dark Jedi Brotherhood Era

Affiliation:

House Odan-Urr

Dossier:

13387

[ Source ]



Character History

Early Years

Born in Narr shadda, Rangel was raised by his father Doc. His mother was murdered by his father at the age of 3, it was accidently, his father did not know that he had the force with in him. He had used force lightning on her in an argument.

So over the years his father was becoming stronger and stronger with the force and started to study the art of science. Not having his father around much Rangel had much time with space craft and learning about its engines.

At the age of 9 his father had become obsessed with the combination of science and the force, that he had started to drink and got crazy with his work. His plan was to multiply Rangel. So Rangel was used as a dummy, taking many blood samples.

Teenage Years

So at age 16, Rangel had experienced his first force encounter. He was running an eran for his father when he got attacked by some muggs. These muggs had weapons pointed at him. Without thinking Rangel force pushed them all out of the loading dock where he was being mugged. He didn't tell his father, instead he took half his days learning how to pick things up using the force. Amazed with his new powers he ran away from home.

Struggling to Survive

Over the next five years he learned how to survive on his own by stealing when necessary, and using the force. Until he came across one Dark Jedi Exile. At the moment he was in Tattooine. He tried stealing his rings on his hands thinking he was a regular person. The excile quickly, using the force stop Rangel. Rangel was in shocked of what had happen. The exile picked Rangel up and threw him out into the desert. In a deep old voice he told Rangel to get up. Rangel got up and tried fighting him back with all he could. All the exile did was force lightning Rangel till he was bearly breathing.

When he woke up, he was in the exile ship. Not knowing what was going on he ask what was going on. The exile laughed and told him about the force. " the force is a gift and you are using it the wrong way, I'm going to teach you and in return you are going to work for me or die." So with no choice he began his training. His job was simple, where he went, Rangel would go get the exile credits or die. So the excile was like a collector. As his power grew more mature, so did the dark side and then the drinking began.

A Father's Debt

Rangel would try to focus on how many beers he drank and how much liqour he could handdle while using the force. The exile send Rangel to Narr Shadda for a debt to pick up for him. What he didn't know was that he was going to meet his father again. Soon after landing in the moon, he made his way to the cantina first for a few drinks. He did a little of pazzak and went of his business. The location was in the cantina where there was an elevator to ger to the bulding behind the cantina.

As he went to the top floor he could sence something wrong. So he prepared himself for battle. As the doors opened he could not believe who he saw. His father was sitting in a big office, very luxurious, very expensive place. His father had cleaned himself very well, he walked towards Rangel and hugged him. Asking where and why did he run away so long ago. Rangel angrily just asked for the debt that he owed to the exile. The father with angry words told Rangel "would you like to know how your mother died". Rangel quickly stuck his father in his face, his father force pushed rangel to the wall. As he got up his father spoke " I too have been training my self , now get up and fight me I can feel your anger growing." His father threw him a sword as he pulled the other of the wall. Both men struck each other's sword on and on all you could hear in the room was the air getting cut by the blades. Throwing each other againts the walls of the office in minutes the alarms went off signaling the security. Rangel had to finish him fast. But with the strength of his father overwhelming his own Rangel knew he could not rely on strength, but the force. His father had kicked him and used force lightning on him. As Rangel was yelling at the top of his lungs his father told him that he sounded like his mother when she died. Rangel quickly returned the lightning back. His father jumped back up after that return. One last sword fight. As he picked up the sword Rangel quickly picked up his sword and threw it to his father using the force. The intensity of the force pushed him out the window. As he fell of the top of the floor of a 100 floor building he landed in the middle of the cantina. Rangel reached into his desk and grabbed the bags of credits that were in there. He made his way down the elevator thinking to himself how could he kill his own father. When the doors opened troopers where out there waiting for him. The troopers arested Rangel for the murder of his father Dr. Rangel Doc.

Telosian Jedi Academy

Reunited

Treasure Hunter

The Dark Jedi Brotherhood

The Story

Rangel was born in the Nar Shadda, there his father had traded him for ton of money to start his bussiness of cyber parts for people. His father became a success in his bussiness and forgot about Rangel. His mother had died giving bith to him. The owner that bought him raised him as his personal slave dragging him planet to planet fixing star ships and motor vehicles. At the age of 15 his slave master told him about how he became a slave, this angered Rangel alot and wanted revenge. One night he stayed up late wondering why his father gave him up, with so much anger in him he became lost. Had trashed his master's shop with Force lighting destroying his master and his shop. A mystery it was when he got angry he tended to blackout with waking up destroying everything. He flew planet to planet in search of his father, till finally he found him in Telos IV. His faher had sence him coming and send assasins to try to kill him. At the surface of Telos IV, one of the assasins got on his ship and tryed killing him, Rangel passed out with the same results. But this time he had crashed rite outside of the Telosian Jedi Academy. There he meet the ghost spirit Attris, she trained him to control the force with an exchange to rebuilt the Academy. Rangel agreed and so over the next 5 years she trained him. At the end of his training she had him create a sword for protection, since he is not a Jedi he cannot hold a lightsaber. He was making his way to his father's Empire when he met a old fellow treasure hunter who was having engine trouble, there Rangel found the opportunity to fly to his fathers. As the problem got fixed the old man took him and there he meet his father. Rangel got on the elevator and went to the top floor where his father's office was. Him and his father had clashed with each other trying to kill each other, in the end Rangel did a suicidal move, he tackeled his father threw the window, going down 100 floors to the ground. When they got to the ground Rangel had his sword stabbed into his father's heart. The old man from before took Rangel and went off into deep space. Rangel had become a treasure hunter for the next 3 years, till finally when their ship landed on Antei he knew what he had to do. He ended his treasure hunting and joined the Dark Jedi Brotherhood where he knew there was more to him than just treasure hunting