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| As for the rest of it, you should read it over and correct some spelling and grammar mistakes... I fixed the ones I saw, but it could use a good proofreading. --[[User:Shadow Taldrya|Shadow Taldrya]] 21:14, 5 March 2008 (MST) | | As for the rest of it, you should read it over and correct some spelling and grammar mistakes... I fixed the ones I saw, but it could use a good proofreading. --[[User:Shadow Taldrya|Shadow Taldrya]] 21:14, 5 March 2008 (MST) |
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I've added these two maintenance tags to your article because a) it's not yet complete, and b) your history violates the DB's policy not to interfere with canonical characters. Interacting with Luke, and being a student of Kyle is going overboard and you should look into fixing up your history to meet DB standards.
As for the rest of it, you should read it over and correct some spelling and grammar mistakes... I fixed the ones I saw, but it could use a good proofreading. --Shadow Taldrya 21:14, 5 March 2008 (MST)
Items addressed, but we don't delete discussion pages. --Shadow Taldrya 22:33, 16 March 2008 (MDT)