| The history concerning your time as a jedi is a bit suspect, especially in terms of your interactions with Luke. The very beginning of the Jedi Praxeum opening is very well documented, so it is highly unlikely you were around for that time. Coupled with having "dark urges" and interacting directly with Luke Skywalker makes it even more suspect. We do try staying away from direction interaction with the "main" character of SW, and the main plot-points of the EU. I would suggest some heavy revision here, lessening the impact you have with the main components of the SW timeline--[[User:Halcyon|Halcyon]] 20:38, 18 October 2007 (MDT) | | The history concerning your time as a jedi is a bit suspect, especially in terms of your interactions with Luke. The very beginning of the Jedi Praxeum opening is very well documented, so it is highly unlikely you were around for that time. Coupled with having "dark urges" and interacting directly with Luke Skywalker makes it even more suspect. We do try staying away from direction interaction with the "main" character of SW, and the main plot-points of the EU. I would suggest some heavy revision here, lessening the impact you have with the main components of the SW timeline--[[User:Halcyon|Halcyon]] 20:38, 18 October 2007 (MDT) |
| *Given there was only one Jedi Master at the time, i.e. Luke, there really isn't much of an alternative option other than interaction with him to at least some extent with having been a Jedi in the early years of the NJO. I'd make it later on but having joined the DB in 14 ABY doesn't really leave much room to do so. I'd add a new Jedi Master, but honestly with how many members have unheard of Jedi Masters having survived the purge to train them in the DB universe the purge wasn't much of a purge, so I've always disliked that one.<br><br>I left the article intentionally vague and ambiguous with only generalised references to the "Masters Council" and such so as to not introduce an entirely original Kyle Katarn-style character who didn't exist. The one thing that is documented beyond a doubt at the time is the people who made it to Jedi Knight, so I stayed well clear of introducing a new one of those to act as a tutor.<br><br>It does mention Luke, true, but only in as much as that at the time Luke was calling the shots on almost everything, at the end of the day, though he didn't get the title until much later, Luke always acted like Grand Master in a capacity the old order never had. As ''Jedi Academy'' in particular shows, the early NJO wasn't like the old order and Masters (well, technically just Knights at the time) trained people more like it was school with Luke as the headmaster and the final say on everything. With that in mind when I wrote it I felt it would be unrealistic ''not'' to have some commentary from him, enough Jedi went dark during that period for Xanos's fall to be a largely trivial matter, especially given his fall was not as openly direct as with some of the canon students who turned dark at the time. Plus, at the end of the day, it was Luke's academy, he knew all the students, anyone who trained there at anytime would have at least met him once, again ''Jedi Academy'' does a good job of showing his direct interaction even with the newbies.<br><br>I accept your point that the "first class" of Gantoris, Kyp, the Solo twins, etc, is all well documented in the ''Jedi Academy Trilogy'' but more recent sources have tended to blur that quite a bit, even things like ''Jedi Academy'' introducing characters like Desann went a long way to making the NJO feel much larger than the limited faces we saw in the original books which first introduced the Jedi Praxeum. Speaking of Desann in particular, the story draws a lot of inspiration from his backstory and he had time to join, go dark, quit, join the Empire Reborn, create an army and then cause the problems in ''Jedi Outcast'' within two or three years, which if you go exclusively by the old sources, would mean when the NJO was still only being treated as about a dozen kids. That was why I deliberately made sure not to mention being a member of the "first class", but just one of the random subsequent students of little consequence. Take Jaden Korr, Rosh Penin, etc, they're all training around the same time, maybe a year or two later, interact a fair bit with Luke, moreso than Xanos, but at the end of the day are wholly unimportant characters in the greater scheme of things. Ironically Brakiss was a far more significant character in the 10-20 ABY period yet he was never mentioned once until we suddenly learned "he was a Jedi who went dark a few years back" which shows how much the era has been retconned over the years.<br><br>That all said, if it makes everyone feel better, I can replace "Luke Skywalker" with simply "the Masters" and leave it at that. It doesn't make an awful lot of difference to me. --[[User:Xanos|Xanos]] 05:05, 19 October 2007 (MDT) | | *Given there was only one Jedi Master at the time, i.e. Luke, there really isn't much of an alternative option other than interaction with him to at least some extent with having been a Jedi in the early years of the NJO. I'd make it later on but having joined the DB in 14 ABY doesn't really leave much room to do so. I'd add a new Jedi Master, but honestly with how many members have unheard of Jedi Masters having survived the purge to train them in the DB universe the purge wasn't much of a purge, so I've always disliked that one.<br><br>I left the article intentionally vague and ambiguous with only generalised references to the "Masters Council" and such so as to not introduce an entirely original Kyle Katarn-style character who didn't exist. The one thing that is documented beyond a doubt at the time is the people who made it to Jedi Knight, so I stayed well clear of introducing a new one of those to act as a tutor.<br><br>It does mention Luke, true, but only in as much as that at the time Luke was calling the shots on almost everything, at the end of the day, though he didn't get the title until much later, Luke always acted like Grand Master in a capacity the old order never had. As ''Jedi Academy'' in particular shows, the early NJO wasn't like the old order and Masters (well, technically just Knights at the time) trained people more like it was school with Luke as the headmaster and the final say on everything. With that in mind when I wrote it I felt it would be unrealistic ''not'' to have some commentary from him, enough Jedi went dark during that period for Xanos's fall to be a largely trivial matter, especially given his fall was not as openly direct as with some of the canon students who turned dark at the time. Plus, at the end of the day, it was Luke's academy, he knew all the students, anyone who trained there at anytime would have at least met him once, again ''Jedi Academy'' does a good job of showing his direct interaction even with the newbies.<br><br>I accept your point that the "first class" of Gantoris, Kyp, the Solo twins, etc, is all well documented in the ''Jedi Academy Trilogy'' but more recent sources have tended to blur that quite a bit, even things like ''Jedi Outcast'' introducing characters like Desann went a long way to making the NJO feel much larger than the limited faces we saw in the original books which first introduced the Jedi Praxeum. Speaking of Desann in particular, the story draws a lot of inspiration from his backstory and he had time to join, go dark, quit, join the Empire Reborn, create an army and then cause the problems in ''Jedi Outcast'' within two or three years, which if you go exclusively by the old sources, would mean when the NJO was still only being treated as about a dozen kids. That was why I deliberately made sure not to mention being a member of the "first class", but just one of the random subsequent students of little consequence. Take Jaden Korr, Rosh Penin, etc, they're all training around the same time, maybe a year or two later, interact a fair bit with Luke, moreso than Xanos, but at the end of the day are wholly unimportant characters in the greater scheme of things. Ironically Brakiss was a far more significant character in the 10-20 ABY period yet he was never mentioned once until we suddenly learned "he was a Jedi who went dark a few years back" which shows how much the era has been retconned over the years.<br><br>That all said, if it makes everyone feel better, I can replace "Luke Skywalker" with simply "the Masters" and leave it at that. It doesn't make an awful lot of difference to me. --[[User:Xanos|Xanos]] 05:05, 19 October 2007 (MDT) |