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| | I want some one to critique my page and advise on needed corections . |
| | Thanks [[User:Sutekh'Sithari|Sutekh'Sithari]] 06:46, 3 December 2011 (UTC) |
Revision as of 06:46, 3 December 2011
text will be added to multiple sections —Preceding unsigned comment added by Sutekh'Sithari
Non Canon
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Halcyon - Deputy Grand Master
TALK - 02:55, 6 December 2010 (UTC)
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I have tagged your character page now, as I can already tell that it will not be in the realm of "realism" for Star Wars or the Dark Brotherhood. You are just a beginner in the DB, therefore do not have much power as of yet. What you are mentioning appears to be more along the lines of a Sith Lord. It also appears that you are taking liberally from the Stargate universe, which does not have anything to do with us. When creating your character, please base it firmly in the Star Wars galaxy. Look at the other character pages for some ideas
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Wiki changes
I have removed one tag and I am waiting review by wiki staff in hopes of having the remaining tag removed. The text will be added after a re write.
Sutekh'Sithari
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Windos - Wiki Staffer
TALK - 00:52, 17 December 2010 (UTC)
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I have removed the Non Canon tag, mainly because there is effectly no text on your page at the moment to be non canon :P
The other tag (imagery) was there because you had like... 2 dozen (exageration) images on your page and it was just like one big gallery; which it sort of still is but only because of the above mentioned lack of text.
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Page requirements
I wanted to know if the page requirements have been met ? In order to advance in rank ,my page needs to be approved.
PRT Sutekh'Sithari(Sith)/FM/Taldryan[ACC:INI]
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Windos - Wiki Staffer
TALK - 03:12, 17 December 2010 (UTC)
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For the porpose of filling the requirment: Begin writing your character’s wiki article. This means that some reasonable effort should have been put into making a new article (for example, a rough character outline, headings, maybe an image) - basically, more than just the template.
Yes, you do have more than just the template, so technically yes...
Keep in mind that your article is currently 1,459 bytes in length. 211 of those bytes are used to call the various images and a further 259 is in the template (minus the information that has been added to it).
This means that the information in your article (headings and categories included total 989 bytes. this is about 1/10th of the requirment for a DJBWiki writer award and is also the point where I would consider it to have met the requirement for DJK promotion: Complete a quality wiki article (it could be your character’s) as determined by your House leadership or Master.
Just a but of info... for you information :P
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review
I want some one to critique my page and advise on needed corections .
Thanks Sutekh'Sithari 06:46, 3 December 2011 (UTC)
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